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SPOILER Chuck Wendig - Aftermath (Journey to The Force Awakens)

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    It took me five hours, but I did it! Here it goes. It is in the title, but this review contains SPOILERS!!!



    While preparing for this book to come out, I picked up another new Wendig's book, Zer0es, written in the same style as Aftermath. And, I got worried. While it was a descent book, I didn't love it. I didn't particularly liked it either. But, I liked this book. So, I came to the conclusion that it was the subject of Zer0es I didn't care about, the style didn't have anything to do about it.

    And, I have come to another conclusion. People are either going to hate or love this book. It depends on your expectations. If you hoped to see the Big Three or maybe a book similar to old EU, I'm not sure you'll care for it. I have not read the old EU and I took the marketing of this book seriously. I went to it with an open mind and I enjoyed it. Did it blew my socks off? No. But, it made me smile in the end and it made me excited for the things to come.

    The group that comes together in this book is a definition of ragtag. Norra Wexley is a rebel pilot, veteran of Battle of Endor, who left her son to join the Rebellion and look for her husband, taken by the Empire. She suffers from PTSD and hopes to start a new life with her son, Temmin. Only Temmin is not a child anymore. He had grown up and learned to take care of himself. He is enterprising, angry young man and he cares nothing for his mother's plans. Jas Emari is a bounty hunter whose target is Imperial banker. She saw the changing winds in the galaxy and started working for the Rebellion/Resistance. Sinjir Rath Velus is former Imperial loyalty officer (read: secret police), who defected after Endor and now drinks his days away. To round up the group is Mister Bones, Temmin's battle droid from the Clone Wars turned into a crazy killing machine/bodyguard. Their paths meet on Akiva, a planet the remnants of Imperial forces chose to hold a secret summit on and decide the future of the Empire. They are led by Admiral Sloan who we've met in A New Dawn. They hear the message from captured Wedge Antilles and they decide to help: some for money, some for the cause, some because they have nothing else to do.

    Their story is interspersed with occurrences throughout the galaxy, some connected, some not, but all giving us the taste of chaos and change. And, even a glimpse at our favorite smuggler and his co-pilot, still doing the right thing in his own unique way. A certain princess is going to be pissed. :D

    What this book does right is that it captures the spirit of Star Wars: the adventure, the terrible odds (I know, I know, never tell me...), the heart-pounding action, but also the wry humor. Like I said, it made me smile. It gave us the characters, new characters, to care about, but characters that are also familiar: they are not perfect, not one of them. What this book could have done better is to rein in the connections with everything else in the canon. Some of them made me happy (Fulcrum was mentioned, for example), some smile and some - roll my eyes. Moderation should be the key for the future books. We want to make galaxy bigger, not smaller.

    So, lets talk about Journey to the Force Awakens. If you thought that Aftermath will lay out everything for you, think again. What it will give you are nuggets of gold to hunt in all the sand of Tatooine (or Jakku or whatever). What it will give you is another heap of things to speculate about.The most important one will be: Who is the mysterious Admiral, the real Admiral revealed at the end of the novel? For he leads the remnants of the Empire towards the Vulpinus Nebula. He says to Sloan:

    Thrawn? Or someone like him?

    What about Sith?

    I will not go into more details. Some of the things you already know and they are accurate. Plus, I need another read to catch everything and I am sure that even then I will miss things. I don't remember names well, especially SW names and, like I said, I haven't read the old EU, so I wouldn't know if they resurrected some elements of it (I know about Thrawn because everyone does in this fandom). What I will say is that many speculations we see around the net have surely come from this book.

    I enjoyed this novel a lot. I don't know if the other two books in the trilogy will follow the same characters, but I surely hope so. I liked them a lot (Sinjir is currently my favorite) and they are made into a team by Ackbar and sent on the mission. The book gives us a wider picture of the galaxy: the hope in returning democracy and peace, the battles still ahead (the irony of short Jakku chapter sears) and uncertainty of the future.

    I'm leaving you with two excerpts that show two possible faces of that future:

    Hopefully, we will get more lovely nuggets in other Journey books. Now we can speculate! :)
     
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    Nice review! I agree with pretty much everything you said (I hadn't even considered the mystery-Admiral could be nuThrawn... I like the idea though!), but I'll also add a couple of my own takeaways
    1) The book felt fragmented to me at the beginning, we start off following all these individual characters, and it's hard to see how they all fit together. Once they all team up, this problem pretty much disappeared, and I enjoyed the book much more.
    2) Some small part of me wishes Norra had actually died when she crashed into the palace. I'm not sure how it would have shaken up the other books in the trilogy, but for this one it would have been interesting to see her never actually patch things up with her son, not a huge issue, but it seemed a bit telegraphed in it's delivery.
    3) I'm not 100% sure why Wedge is in this book. It seems like most anyone could have taken his role in the plot, perhaps this just means that he's going to be a prominent character in the other Aftermath books (which seems to be the case from the ending).
    4) Sinjir is obviously the best, there shall be no arguing of this point. :D
     
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    Yeah, there were too many 'almost died' in this book, but, you know, Star Wars. Heroes rarely die here. Only the broken-hearted or old, lol.

    As for Wedge, I guess they wanted the old character, one build up through years of fans' imagination and old EU, to draw us in and make us care. But, the truth is, I often forgot about him while reading the new characters' adventure. You are right, it could have been anyone. I am not sure that he will be more in the sequels.

    Sinjir rocks. The entire 'enemy of the Empire' speech was fantastic. Plus, I like anti-heroes who are also sarcastic little shits. :D
     
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    Just finished the book. Was surreal to be reading the first new, official post-ROTJ addition to the Star Wars Universe.

    I could have done without all the teases of Norra's death, but I enjoyed the book (and loved the Wedge/Fulcrum link).

    One thing struck me, and I'm not sure whether this goes in the TFA section or here, but we've heard nothing about Coruscant's place in the galaxy, big picture-wise. There were a few scenes among regular people that took place there. And hints that there was some larger conflict on the planet, but it didn't sound like the New Republic was in a rush to take it. So is the story group just ignoring Coruscant, or is there more in store for the planet later on?
     
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    The books suggests urban war, where Rebels have to fight for each sector. The last part in the book where Coruscant is mentioned is with two orphans, part of the Anklebiter Brigade. They were taken to safety, presumably by Rebels. Iggs wants to go back:

    So, presumably, the war on Coruscant is still going on. It's logical, that's Empire's seat of power, they aren't going to give it up easily. So, we'll see more in the next two books. As for it's place in galaxy, it's suggested it's not going to be the seat of the New Republic, at least not for now. It's Chandrila.
     
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    Interesting: Palpatine believed his power came from beyond the known galaxy? And sent explorers?

    In the EU, there were the Unknown Regions, a segment of the galaxy that wasn't properly charted. Then there was all that was outside of the SW galaxy, which is where the Yuuzhan Vong came from.

    I don't recall exactly, but there may be a Thrawn connection in the making. In the book Outbound Flight, a mission to explore what I believe are the Unknown Regions (I haven't read it in ages) leads to the discovery of the Chiss, including Thrawn. If something like that is being teased in Aftermath, we might be getting Thrawn back (or Disney is simply ripping the EU off!).
     
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    While I liked the book I feel they gave false advertising. There is maybe two points which might relate 30 years hence. One the Knights of Ren seems to already to have been formed prior to the demise of the Emperor. The Second is that the First Order is being formed outside the rest of the galaxy. Other than that The New Republic does get formed. But not much else is hinted. Maybe when the other parts of the trilogy happens then maybe we will get somewhere closer to the action in the Force Awakens.
     
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    I just finished reading the book, I definitely enjoyed it, while its definitely not as enthralling as the Thrawn Trilogy of old, I wasn't expecting that anyhow. As a fan of the EU who read most of the novels and comics, I find it interesting to compare and contrast the new stories with what came before.

    I liked Sloan's character in the New Dawn novel, but I grew more fascinated by her in this one, she definitely reminds me of one of my favorite Imperial characters from the EU, namely Gilad Pellaeon who initialy served served under Thrawn, the comparison seeming all the more likely when we are introduced to the cultured Admiral that she serves under at the end of the book. As for this mysterious Fleet Admiral that we meet at the end of the book, if he isn't Thrawn, he is certainly an analog for him.

    Also, did anyone else notice the possible reference to Sabine Wren in the first Chandrila interelude?

    "Oh! But, uh. Don't forget, too, to get a shot of the art installation in the city circle - it's a bunch of stormtrooper helmets painted different colors, marked with different symbols like flowers and starbursts and Alliance sigils. Its by the artist-"

    Of course the character is cutoff before she can finish, but I can't see why they would put that in there unless they wanted to hint about Sabine, additionally, leaving it so vague means they aren't in trouble if Sabine gets killed by the end of Rebels.
     
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    @Admiral Petty, I completely missed that! And, I believe you could be right. I would really like you to be right. :)

    I liked how Wendig used every part of canon in the book, even things that are just announced.
     
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    After reading two chapters of this with on open mind I have realized I will never open this book again, so I'm going to read what others think of it.
     
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    I have not finished it. I finished the other Solo, Leia, Luke books, which I was NOT at all impressed with. Trying to wrap this book up and I will share my thoughts as well. So far I'm not crazy about it. I feel as if they gave Wendig WAY TOO MUCH ground to cover and the cadence of the narrative is over-caffeinated/frantic. I wonder how much time he had to write it because it feels very rushed.
     
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    Kyle, I find it absolutely unreadable. Forget the first/third present/past tense nonsense. This guy has no particular respect for basic grammar and his combination of words is a far cry from fully fledged sentences. It's infuriating to know I paid $16 for this pile of trash someone decided to put into print and call literature. It's mind boggling. -_-
     
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    Just finished the book and can finally read this thread.

    Woot.

    It's a bit too late at night for me to give my thoughts on the book, but I did like it and agree with several posts already made about some of its strengths and weaknesses. I look forward to sharing more tomorrow.
     
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    I hear ya'. Total wasted opportunity! One of the ideas I spoke about to our staff was a book like this, only organized as an anthology or Pulp Fiction kind of style. Stories overlapping but each one stands on its own.

    My biggest gripe is that as soon as a character or story gets interesting we are whisked away to another part of the Galaxy.

    Again, I'm still not finished with the book but I'm not crazy about it so far.
     
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    Just finished the book in one (long) sitting, and I really liked it! @LadyMusashi, your review is on point. I'm super excited to see where the series goes and I hope to see more of Admiral Sloane. Sadly, I have to disagree with the best character - the award clearly needs to go to Mister Bones!! :)
     
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    While I did enjoy this book overall, I think part of the problem is that the book isn't at all what people were expecting, namely something following the heroes of the OT in a story set after RotJ. We got glimpses sure, like Han and Chewie with the Kashyyyk story thread, which were very tantalizing for sure, but that's it. We instead got the story of Norra, Sinjir, Jas and such. I honestly did enjoy their story, however I won't deny that the interludes often seemed to present more interesting story opportunities than the main narrative itself(the Han and Chewie segment for instance).

    While I did enjoy the book overall, I don't know if I agree with the story focus at this point in the new canon material. Lets take a brief look at the old Legends/EU material for context, namely the way they handled storytelling early on. To properly kick of the EU as we knew it, the starting point was Zahn's Heir to the Empire Trilogy. In that trilogy we got an exciting adventure following the heroes we know from the OT while introducing other characters like Thrawn, Mara Jade and Talon Karde that became staples and fan favorites in the EU going forward. With the Heir to the Empire series we got a story that wasn't afraid to go big and introduce new things, but more importantly, a story that actually felt like it was a Star Wars movie that we could see happening on the big screen, with all the heroes we love and grandiose villains we love to hate(yet find fascinating at the same time).

    As the EU went on though, we saw more and more original characters introduced, as well as more types of stories, we still had the grand cinematic stories featuring the heroes from the OT, however, we also got other stories focusing on the regular guy. For instance, we had the the X-Wing series which primarily focused on Corran Horn(at least for the first four books) flying in the famous Rogue Squadron, however even that series was grounded by the heavily felt presence of fan favorite character Wedge Antilles(who barely factored into Aftermath) as the commander of Rogue Squadron. As the X-Wing series went on and we got more familiar with and attached to Corran Horn, that set the stage for Corran Horn getting his own book, I, Jedi, one of my all time favorite Star Wars novels(and generally regarded as a fan favorite as well).

    As the EU became more and more established, we got to see more fan favorite original characters like Mara Jade and Corran Horn. Most EU readers came to love these characters nearly as much, if not just as much, as the heroes of the OT(myself included). However, since these characters were introduced in stories that featured the characters that fans already loved, it wasn't as much of a shock when these characters started to get stories that focused on them, fans already loved these new characters at that point because of the groundwork that had been laid in previous Star Wars stories. As time went, the EU began to see more and more stories showcasing new original characters and even new time periods, like stories showing the ancient battles between the Jedi and the Sith that took place thousands of years before the OT, introducing even more fan favorite characters like Revan.

    The EU also had interesting anthology books like Tales from the Mos Eisley Cantina, and Tales from Jabba's Palace, which I couldn't help but be reminded of when Kyle mentioned his hopes for a book with an anthology style of storytelling. The fact is, the EU offered an incredible variety when it came to styles of storytelling and stories themselves, however I can't help but feel that a key portion of the EU's success came from the fact that it gave fans what they wanted early on, namely stories featuring their favorite characters from the movies. I honestly can't see fans reacting as positively to a story like I, Jedi if it were one of the first Star Wars novels to have come out when the EU got going. By making that statement I'm not saying that I, Jedi doesn't have a great story or that it is a lesser novel somehow(in fact its probably my personal favorite EU novel), but it definitely wouldn't have been nearly as well received by fans had it been their first glimpse at the the state of the Star Wars Universe following RotJ.

    When looking at Aftermath, and frankly, the rest of the adult novels(as in not young adult, not naughty ;)) so far in the new canon, I find a puzzling lack of focus on the main heroes that we know and love from the movies(other than Heir to the Jedi, which frankly disappointed some). The comics in the new canon so far seem to have a better overall reaction from fans, and I can't help but wonder if that is because the comics have been focusing more on the heroes from the OT, and have felt more cinematic as well in their scope. They have introduced us to new characters that fans are already starting to like, such as Doctor Aphra, but I kind of doubt that fans would have responded as kindly to her if she first appeared in her own Star Wars series while fans were still waiting to see a series starring their favorite characters from the movies.

    All of that being said, I still did enjoy Aftermath, and I look forward to seeing where the stories of these new characters go, since I did actually grow attached to them by the end of the book. I'm not going to lie though, as interesting as those characters were though, I'm still hungry for stories following Han, Luke and Leia, and getting to see what they were up to during this time period in the new canon. I just hope that the focus of the novels in the new canon so far doesn't discourage new readers from diving further into the Star War universe because of unmet expectations regarding the characters from the movies who they already know and love.
     
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    Ha, ha, the crazy droids always win the audience. I think his appeal comes from totally subverting the image of battle droids as Jedi cannon (or lightsaber) fodder. Wendig managed to make him scary which is success in and on itself.

    But, I am sucker for an anti-hero. Therefore, Sinjir.

    I am thinking that they are holding back before the movie comes out. They want the first post-ROTJ impression of old characters to be in the Force Awakens, so that they can build up from there.

    I said before that I am not an old EU reader, so I don't know how good or not those books were, but, as I understand it, one of the reasons for making them legend was that they didn't fit into the story of movies, especially prequels. So, rather than retcon half of the EU, they killed it and started over with the clean slate. If it's any consolation to the old EU fans, those books still exist and are continually printed. They could have easily made them unavailable, but they didn't. So, the stories are there for the taking if people want them. The comic book fans know this, as their universes are reset every couple of years. What you love - you love. No one can take that away from you. :)
     
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    The absence the big 3 is the least of my problems. The main issue is with disjointed thought process. The sentences are thrown around everywhere. It's really hard to focus on the scene. For Example:

    Chapter 2, page 26.

    It's a scene where a ship flees from Imperials entering a planet's atmosphere.

    Clouds whip past.
    The ship bangs and judders as it kicks a hole in the atmosphere.
    This is my home, she thinks. Or was. She grew up on Akiva. More important, Norra then was like Norra now: She doesn't much care for people. She went off on her own a lot. Explored the wilds outside the capital city of Myrra - the old temples, the cave systems, the rivers, the canyons.
    She knows those places. Every switchback, every bend, every nook and cranny. Again she thinks, This is my home, and with that mantra set to repeat, she stills her shaking hands and banks hard to starboard, corkscrewing the ship as laserfire blasts past.



    First of all, what the hell is with "This is my home" phrase randomly injected over and over through this chapter section. It absolutely doesn't inform me what kind of woman is behind the controls or how she "feels" about the planet. Instead of focusing on building the tension of a chase he injects half-baked descriptions of how Norra supposed to feel about this planet, and even that is hardly accomplished with stale, unimaginative words that fail to paint the visual image.

    And this kind of erratic writing is all over the first 3 chapters. Someone, please convince me it gets better and I will try to give this a 3rd chance. I really, really want to like this book but I have fundamental literary standards I'm not willing to let go of. This Chuck guy doesn't seem to know two things about writing. I thought some hardcore fanboys were simply spitting venom at him, calling him a Blogger mouth. The irony is, his prose does really read like a bloated Twitter message.
     
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    We'll have to agree to disagree, @Ben_Kenobi. :)

    I actually like his writing, it is very immediate, very cinematic. And, I can't wait the sequels. Apparently, the schedule is one book a year, though he said few days ago at Dragon Con that he hopes to have both book out before Episode VIII.
     
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    LoL, LadyMushasi, I'm glad you disagree. It's great to have different perspective! I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
    I don't want to insult your taste by any means, I'm sure you read a lot of sci-fi outside of media tie-ins, right???

    I've heard that description of his "style" before - cinematic. The "X-Wing" books by M.A. Stackpole have tremendously gritty action set pieces with detailed descriptions of space craft, tactical maneuvers, and instruments. The advantage of reading a book is all the extra richness of the scenes, characters, and the action where as a film's approach is to strip down the story to its core elements since you don't have enough screen time to put everything in. If Wendin's prose is what people refer to as "cinematic" I don't want any more of it.
     
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