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Mace Windu - The Fall of Jedi

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Ewok terrorist, Feb 28, 2015.

  1. Ewok terrorist

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    we are all Star Wars fans and these threads just take your imagination on a journey...which make me remember back in art school yrs ago I took a comic book class. We had to chose a topic and due a kinda side story to it that connects to the original. I chose Star Wars and the character of mace windu, I continued his story in a 13 page comic book...

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    That deals with the family tree. I knew going in that Lucas felt family tees were very important to the stories arc so I decided to have fun with that.

    To make a long story short I will run through the plot . Mace survives the fall from palpatines office. He is helped while near unconsciousness, by a beautiful citizen on the lower gritty levels of coruscant. She nurses him back, he heads back to the temple even after getting the obi wan message. He discovers the holo- vid of anakin slaughtering younglings. Heads to his barracks to retrieve enough credits for the journey off planet. And makes good use of the medical bay to have medical droids attach a robotic hand. Escapes the temple,but not before taking out some clones. Heads back to the girl who helped him offers to take her knowing she would be killed for helping.

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    They both flee off world to the edge of known space to a planet called Deveron

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    The devoronians are a prejudice species who hate humans. Mace has to ink out a harsh living for his new family Mace changes his name to Ghosh his name before being brought to the temple as an infant. He has a daughter with the woman who saves him who is not force sensitive. She does not take his name so that she can remain safe. Palpatine and Vader are aware of mace surviving due to the empires surveillance cams. Vader dispatches probes to the outer rim to collect info, but palpatine secretly hire's a young 25yr old bounty hunter named boba fett to kill mace, not wanting Vader involved fearing more damage being done to Vader suit

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    Fett tracks down mace and kills him catching mace unaware...fett getting his revenge on the 65 yr old man who killed his father jango. His daughter Shanti grows up with no father yep...(daddy issues) she falls for a boy named Grizz Fritz (actual character)

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    who marries and gets her pregnant ,then later joining the rebellion as a x-wing pilot, before ever finding out he has a son he is shot down over Endor 4 yrs ABY in ROTJ. Now here is what I'm adding to the storyline 30yrs later a young 26yr old Finn

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    joins the Empire as a storm trooper, he was never told of his fathers past rebellion service and his mom made sure he never took his father surname for fear of any (imperial entanglements.) He seems to have no force abilities until the FORCE AWAKENS in his blood stream in episode 7, but the inquisitors sense him, so he has to desert his unit going on the run and is rescued by Rey on tattoine.
     

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    Great story you might have something going here.
     
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