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GAME Make your own Star Wars character.

Discussion in 'Gaming And Competitions' started by Darth Revan8, Jan 19, 2015.

  1. Regimus

    Regimus Clone

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    Name: Rygan "Regimus" Aegansaffe
    Occupation/Class: Sith Excommunicate
    Appearance: Gray and scarred, similar to Lord Vader
    Distinguishing Feature: Prosthetic arm
    Apparel: Dark silver Sith armor, similar to the Sith Stalker Armor seen in the Star Wars: The Force Unleashed games
    Weaponry: Crimson lightsaber
    Favored Force abilities: Push, Grip, Choke, enjoys sensing the thoughts of others without influencing them

    Backstory: Short before the beginning of the rise of Emporer Palpatine, Dantooine countryman Kalizar Arjintskif owed a harsh debt to the self-imposed "Dark Lord of the Sith," Lucian "Darth Lycan" Wülf. As payment, Lycan took Arjintskif's only son, an infant born Rygan, and took him to the remote world of Cotanikot, on the very edge of the Kessel system. Hidden within the tallest mountain of Cotanikot's toxic atmosphere was Lycan's own Sith Temple, lacking the traditional architecture of the true temple on Korriban but much more populated.

    Rygan was raised under the name Aegansaffe, fabricated by Lycan to dissuade him from searching for his family, by Lycan's "Gray Order," a circle of twelve well-trained Sith Lords that had all, at one time, been Lycan's apprentices. Rygan showed promise of being exceptionally powerful in the Force, but favored one-handed combat with a fairly standard lightsaber. When Rygan turned ten, he was awarded the Sith name "Kronosis."

    After being knighted as a Sith'ari, Rygan was sent on several missions between the ages of ten and thirteen, sometimes working directly with Lycan but most often with another young apprentice, under the supervision of a Gray Order master. At first, these missions were relatively fun, but each one was more difficult, not just in how they tested his skills and power, but in how he came to find some morally questionable. On his last mission, Lycan made the mistake of sending Rygan alone to Dantooine, to kill the Arjintskif family. Rygan learned on this mission that he had been sent to kill his own parents upon seeing the stunning resemblance between Arjintskif's new son, Faktore, and himself, and drew the line at that. He never told any of the family members, those being Arjintskif, his wife, and Faktore, who he really was, introducing himself as Aegansaffe, and tried to help them escape into hiding where Lycan, with his limited resources, would not find them.

    Unfortunately, guards at the spaceport recognized Rygan as the intergalactic murderer Kronosis, and opened fire; his and Faktore's parents were killed, but Rygan was able to get his little brother on a ship going farther into the Outer Rim. Rygan would not later hear that the same ship would crashland on Iegalore, leaving Faktore as the wreck's sole survivor and at the mercy of a small settlement of other marooned survivors.

    Afterward, Rygan fled from both intergalactic authorities and the only family he'd known, renouncing the name Darth Kronosis and getting by as Rygan Aegansaffe, swearing he'd never return to the Dark Side of the Force. But as Lycan's prized apprentice, the Gray Order hunted him relentlessly, always seeming to find Rygan in whatever system he hid in. Rygan was able to get by on his own until he was eighteen, when he was shot down over the desert world of Geonosis, where he crashlanded. Marooned with no food and water, he eandered aimlessly for eight days, calling on the Force to keep him hydrated, but it was a mere delaying tactic.

    He was crossing a featureless landscape when thousands of Separatist ships suddenly came overhead, landing all around him and deploying their battle droids by the millions. Fortunately, Rygan was not their target; another military force, human soldiers in white armor that appeared reminiscent of Mandalorian armor, pursued the droids, and Rygan found himself in a massive battleground. This was the first Battle of Geonosis, which inevitably marked the beginning of the Clone Wars.

    Rygan dodged blasterfire coming from all directions, hoping the soldiers might evacuate him, but was uneased by the sight of Jedi Knights aiding the troops. Rygan was sure they would recognize him like the spaceport guards or sense the lingering Dark Side within him, but he caught a lucky break when one Jedi became overwhelmed by a platoon of droids, and he came to her aid. The Jedi was wounded, but he had saved her, and allowed safe passage on her airlift from the battlefield.

    In the aftermath of the battle, as the clone troopers boarded their shockingly large fleet of star cruisers and returned to Coruscant, Rygan surrendered himself to the questioning of the Jedi, choosing to honestly confess his past and explain the terms of his abandonment from Lycan's temple. The initial opinion of the Jedi was to imprison him, but the wise Master Yoda convinced them of another course of action: as Rygan was the first to ever leave the temple, and thus the only proof Lycan's order existed, then he would be accepted among the ranks of the Jedi, but on the condition that he would, unless instructed otherwise by the Jedi Council, ignore the Clone Wars and make eradicating or liberating the members of the Gray Order his sole objective.

    Rygan accepted, and was assigned as the wounded Jedi that he'd saved, Jalain Windriver's Padawan. For a year, Rygan's new master trained him, perfecting his lightsaber techniques and teaching him abilities in the Force that were overlooked by scholars of the Dark Side. At nineteen, Rygan was formally knighted as a Jedi, and for another year he and his master continued to work together in hunting down all of Lycan's camps and cells before targeting the temple on Cotanikot. They and a small platoon of clone troopers engaged in a full assault of the temple, killing most and taking prisoners of those who surrendered. Some members of the Gray Order escaped, but Rygan and Jalain found themselves locked into combat with Lycan. Sadly, Rygan alone walked away from that fight, but his mission was completed.

    It was three months later that the Republic and the Separatists both discovered Iegalore, and began fighting over the now large city made up of the shipwrecked. Rygan recognized his little brother among the more competent survivors, but Faktore held little memory of Rygan. Aside from tinkering with mechanics as a hobby, Faktore had grown into something of a military genius as well; using his battle strategies and knowledge of the land, the Republic forces were able to drive the battle droids off the planet at the cost of just a few buildings. However, it was found that Faktore was, like Rygan, Force-sensitive, but also partially self-taught, and so Rygan personally requested to train him.

    This was denied, and Faktore spent the next year learning from Rygan in secret how to use his gifts. Teaching Faktore, Rygan began to ponder over the philosophies and stipulations of being a Jedi, and for the first time, he came to miss the free nature of the Dark Side's teachings.

    The Republic requested Faktore's aid on many more worlds as the Clone Wars raged into their final year, but one of Faktore's less well thought-out plans led Rygan straight into an explosion. That battle was lost, and Rygan awoke at the mercy of one of Lycan's most faithful former apprentices, who had taken his broken body, replaced what had needed to be replaced, and grafted metal armor plating to his skin. The apprentice called himself Darth Monarch, and that was the main reason why, after Rygan killed him, he adopted the new identity of Darth Regimus. The time Regimus had spent in a coma had included the Republic's last; the Jedi Order had been completely destroyed, but Regimus could still feel Faktore's presence in the Force, and so he set out to finish his revenge.

    For twenty years, Regimus disappeared, always searching for his prey...

    He did not resurface again until the day the Force awakened.
     
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  2. Poto Khan

    Poto Khan Clone

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    Jedi Master Poto Khan
    Homeworld: Rishi Moon
    Race: Human
    Force Abilities: Shatterpoint, force aging, force judgement
    Weapons: One golden hilted teal lightsaber
    Backstory: Born in the middle of the Clone Wars, Poto soon became rank of master. After that, he scanned his clones for any sign that they were conspiring against him. He had them all detaze their chips. Two years after Order 66, he unlocked the ability to keep himself and others from aging. He helped the rebels for years until he had problems breathing. A virus began in his lungs, forcing him to wear a breathing mask like Darth Malgus'. He confronted Darth Vader two years after The Battle of Yavin, altimately defeating him at the cost of his right arm. He received the traditional Jedi robotic hand and once again confronting Vader. Vader, being nearly killed, managed to escape. Finally, Master Poto Khan went to his homeworld and won a ship called The Raven in a game of chance. Now, he rushes to Kamino to recover his army he put in Bacta Tanks so they wouldn't age. With them lied a fleet powerful enough to conquer 12 star systems.
     
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  3. MandoChip

    MandoChip Force Attuned

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    Name/Title: Sempra Lunis, later known as Darth Acharis.

    Home planet: Coruscant

    Gender and Race/Species: A human female who was born to Mandalorian parents Synkal Lunis and Helena Vizsla on the heavily developed core world of Coruscant.

    Era: About 7000 years before The Clone Wars and the Rise of Darth Sidious.

    Weapons(s): One red lightsabre with a uniquely crafted hilt to accommodate the user's slender hands/fingers, and one purple shoto lightsabre with a hilt that doubled-up as a dagger.

    Height, build and appearance: 5ft 10, slender but curvaceous physique with noticeable muscle definition, long greyish-brown hair which was usually tied in a ponytail, piercing emerald green eyes, very pretty but somewhat menacing facial features. She also had unique mythical tattoos and both arms

    Style/apparel: Lightweight but protective and efficient; Acharis' clothing was of bespoke Mandalorian design and build, with strong but subtle sith designs integrated into it. Her choice of clothing and armour was functional but at the same time complimented her striking physique and athletic build: She wore a lightly armoured padded vest that left her lower torso exposed and paired this with matching arm braces, tight grey pants and knee-high boots. She sometimes wore a black Sith cloak over her regular attire whilst not in combat, and regularly sported her own unique Mandalorian helmet as a means of concealing her face and as a reliable form of protection.

    Force powers: Acharis was incredibly strong in the force, she was masterful in the ability of using the force to freeze multiple moving objects/subjects at once i.e. freezing blaster bolts and restraining opponents during combat. A master of battle meditation, Acharis has been known to fully orchestrate and manipulate entire battles via the force, also a very adept practitioner of telekinesis; she could choke, grab and manipulate targets through the force using her mind without needing to actually see them; she only needed to picture them in her mind or know there location. However, her most trusted and strongest ability was force lightning, she had such a control over this ability that the amount of power put into it could even cause the lighting to change colour from the usual blue to deeper shades of purple and even bright red, this ability was so powerful that at full power she could use it to disintegrate her victims. Her strong connection with the force also enabled Acharis to be very proficient in piloting and vehicular combat, although this is something that she didn't much care for or enjoy.

    Combat: A master of both lightsabre combat and hand to hand fighting, Acharis was regarded by some of her peers and enemies as unstoppable or even impossible to match in a fight. Acharis was very adept at most forms of lightsaber combat and had the ability instantly switch her focus to a particular fighting style to adapt to any given opponent or situation, often beating multiple skilled opponents with relative ease, she was brilliant at tactically analysing oppenents during combat. Her favourite and most proficient form of lightsabre/sword fighting was Jar'Kai, in which she would use both her red saber and her smaller shoto blade. A very gifted and agile acrobat, she was also great at using the force to augment her movements during melee combat exchanges and traversal.

    Hope some of you like this idea, I haven't written a story for her yet because I honestly can't be bothered, I might consider drawing an original version of the character though.
     
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  4. DarthFerocity

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    Mark Lutherion (Tenebrise)
    Male Human
    Height: 6.6 Feet tall 2.03 Meters
    HomeWorld: Alderaan
    Alignment (Dark Side) Mercenary
    Weapons: One main curved Lightsaber (like banes) 3 extra lightsabers, 1 blaster (uses 2 lightsabers on Occasion)
    Colors (main one is pure black, one purple one blue one red)
    Force Powers (colored Red): Force Crush, Force choke, Push, Grip, Force lightning, Fear, Repulse, Deadly Sight, Dark Transfer. Force cloak, and Life Drain.
    Saber Forms Mastered: Soresu, Niman Juyo and Ataru.
    Special Ability: The Connection through the force keeps him from ageing but still can be killed through other regular means.

    Born from a business man and an ExSenator
    One day at the age of 6 he went with his father to deliver supplies to Tatooine he felt a disturbance
    “as if millions of voices suddenly cried out in terror and were suddenly silenced.” Of these voices he was able to make out his mother’s sister’s and best friends voices. This caused extreme agony making Him fall to the ground screaming until he passed out. He wakes up to find his dad crying at the news of the Death Star destroying Alderaan killing his family. This caused immense Amount of anger, and despair but mainly feeling of weariness has if he aged a thousand years. The person that was looking after him happened to have been a fallen Jedi that taught him the way of the force after hiding his fathers dead body saying that he had abandoned Tenebrise. Years later the fallen Jedi would pick a fight and be killed by a Jedi. Who had taught him how to about the light side of the force. This Jedi was not willing to do anything besides teach Tenebrise. So Tenebrise has became a slave fighting for entertainment. This was where he had perfected his force powers. Showing his fighting prowess he was awarded parts for a lightsabers. His pain still being fresh despite the years that had passed had turned the crystal black. He then slaughtered the slavers freeing the slaves. Taking all the lightsaber parts.
    He didn’t seek revenge due to both likely firing and the guaranteed result of him not being welcomed with the Jedi anyway. So he goes across the worlds slaying all the criminals he can for payment. Mercilessly killing people not caring about redemption or if the punishment fits the crime.
    After the fall of the emperor he started hunting all remnants of his order. Finally seeing a chance to get revenge. He then joins Luke skywalkers academy has a teacher of why the dark side is evil with the payment of any knowledge recovered by his order. After the academy’s fall he collects all the knowledge he can, later finding young force users and sharing knowledge of his new order and code that relies on ones independence with the force.
    There is no Serenity there are Emotions
    There is no control there are Limitations
    There is no peace there is needing
    There is no there is power there is the force
    The force is our partner
    It will help us gain victory
    Due to Tenebrise's lack of following this was taught to Vagabonds so they can help the needy while seeking eminence power to Shepard people to a better life. Tenebrise Eventually passed on the responsibility seeking to rest before his death. He was attacked by multiple jedi and sith looking to end the person that had threatened both orders he was killed. But foolishly when a sith lord revived him he had somehow growned young through the force and was freed from the sith lords grasp killing him now he hunts jedi and sith that do wrong to people when they had a better alternative.
    Killing people from the shadow earning the name Tenebrise (Which i know that the star wars universe doesn't have the Latin Language in it).

    Sorry for the crappy story and look forward to reading others.
     
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  5. Jakeo

    Jakeo Clone

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    Tom Valso- Jedi turned Rebel Alliance special agent
    Home world- Coruscant
    Abilities- Force speed, Force Sight, Force Slow, and Force choke
    Weapons- Green light saber and red light saber (while undercover as an inquisitor)
    Appearance- Salvaged republic Jedi armor and a red Rebel Alliance uniform

    Tom Valso was a young Jedi general in the waning days of the Clone Wars. When Order 66 was issued his clone commander, Commander Baker, refused to kill his friend and superior. Baker and Tom then traveled to Coruscant to confront the grand chancellor-turned-emperor and instead of attempting to assassinate the Sith Lord, he pledged allegiance to the empire and became the First Inquisitor. Taking Baker as his number 2 and being given a modified republic cruiser called Bounty, Tom tracked down dangerous Jedi with unmatched success, or so it was thought, Tom was really faking their deaths while waiting on a rebellion to form and expand. 5 years after Order 66, the rebellion had become strong enough to be noticed by the higher ups for the first time. Tom secretly contacted the rebels and he Baker, and some loyal clones from his old legion, joined the rebellion. Just before he left the Empire for good he decided to make a public show of the rebellion’s grasps in high places by battling Darth Vader on Coruscant, both men were hurt during the end and Baker had to bail Tom out by blowing up the landing pad they battled on. After the battle Tom became a special agent for the Rebel Alliance and then the New Republic. He later explored the path of the grey Jedis, accepting one must walk in the middle and not on either side.
     
  6. Darth Trellagon

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    Name:Darth Terron
    Life: 27 BBY- 58 ABY
    Species: Zabrak
    Gender: male
    Appearance: a black mask with breathing apparatus and horns on top, black armour and a black cape and hood
    Height: 6’ 5
    Weight: 250 lbs
    Weapons: one red double bladed lightsaber
    Force powers: force push, force jump, force speed, force choke, force lightning, mind tricks

    Darth Terron was born on Dathomir in 27 BBY. He was discovered by Darth Sidious in 10 BBY and was secretly trained by him to replace Vader. After Sidious’ and Vader’s death at the battle of Endor, Darth Terron used a prerecorded holographic message from Sidious deeming him the new emperor, to claim control of the Empire for himself. He amassed a small fleet of Star Destroyers for himself, and attacked other Imperial factions in a fight for control. Darth Terron took a Kel Dor as his apprentice named Darth Koruss. During a difficult battle over Kuat against an Imperial faction, Darth Terron’s star destroyer was badly damaged and he received severe injuries. After his fleet fled to the unknown regions, he received modifications and a cybernetic suit to keep him alive. After staying in the unknown regions until 34 ABY, Darth Terron and his massive fleet re-emerged form hiding to attack the galaxy, only to find it under the control of Kylo Ren and the First Order. Darth Terron engaged in a long war with the First Order, while Darth Koruss tracked down the remnants of the Resistance. Darth Koruss slaughtered the last of the Resistance, including Rey, Finn, and Poe, whom he defeated easily, along with General Leia, who he took prisoner. Darth Terron eventually defeated the First Order, killing Kylo Ren and his forces, and taking his place as Supreme Emperor of the galaxy, until his apprentice betrayed him in 58 ABY.
     
  7. IHaveAGiraffeNeck

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    Name: Zaerbo
    Life: 22 ABY - 55 ABY.
    Species: Mandalorian.
    Gender: Male.
    Appearance: Orange and black Mandalorian armor, with a jetpack on his back.
    Abilities: Prowess with Jetpacks and his custom-made blaster.
    Weapons: His ( Previously mentioned ) custom-made blaster and his wrist rockets on each hand.

    Backstory: Zaerbo was born on Mandalore in 22 ABY, of course, his father was a bounty hunter himself and taught Zaerbo from an early age how to use a blaster. When Zaerbo eventually reached the age of 18 he took on his first ever assignment, to kill his own family. He did it without issue. He managed to hitch a ride to Coruscant where he recieved decent employment, but during an assignment to kill a Hutt he lost his right shoudler and left foot. While he recovered the First Order came to power. Zaerbo was disgusted by their ideas and swiftly began to help the Resistance until he crashed his own ship into a First Order ship to bring it down.
     
  8. Mythosaur

    Mythosaur Clone

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    The Void Mandalorian male
    Homeworld: Tatooine, Mos Eisley
    job: bounty hunter
    Appearance: Red and Black Mandalorian armor
    Abilities: focused and his art of killing people with finesse
    not done yet
     
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  9. cawatrooper

    cawatrooper Jedi General

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    D&D edition, with character model created in Heroforge, along with a character sheet from D&D Beyond that actually makes him playable.


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    Salbax is a trandoshan mercenary, hired by the Inquisitorius to track the location of Jedi after the purge. Skilled in hunting his prey, Salbax usually simply calls on an Inquisitor once a target has been located, though he's been lucky enough to survive a few scraps with renegade Jedi on the few times he's been detected. Carrying a vibroblade, he's even dueled a Jedi to the death, once, aided by his stolen Mandalorian jumppack.
     
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  10. Mythosaur

    Mythosaur Clone

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    The Void Mandalorian male
    Homeworld: Tatooine, Mos Eisley
    job: bounty hunter
    Appearance: Red and Black Mandalorian armor
    Abilities: focused and his art of killing people with finesse
    weapons: Energy sword that he made himself, blaster, flamethrower, freeze thrower, and grapple hook

    Not much can be known about this Mandalorian except everyone fears him
     
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    Clankershot Rebel Trooper

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    Name:Jax Clankershot
    Jedi ( I write fanfic unposted for fun so at the moment hes a knight but I intend to make him a master so just jedi)
    Home planet : Tatooine
    Species: Human ( with a Twi Lek ancestor but it doesnt show in appearance)
    Powers: Force push and general force skills, lightsaber wielding. ( plan to make him have strong mental abilities)
    Weapons: A green lightsaber

    His back story is his grandfather rose to grandmaster status. His ancestry is tied to a clone trooper deserter and a naboo human who both became adopted into a tusken tribe. Their child was born with a force awakening. After a long history eventually his grandfather was discovered by the current ( in my fanfic which takes place way in the future of the canon story) jedi order and rose to grandmaster. Making changes to the laws of jedi and reforming them into a life mostly away from political involvement. And allowing marriage but with stipulations. Jax's father died in a battle. And Jax is very much a good natured jedi who loves his work. But his adventures from knighthood on will make him have much inner conflict.
    --- Double Post Merged, Dec 10, 2019, Original Post Date: Dec 10, 2019 ---

    BTW the clone is NOT his grandfather in case you didnt get it. It's his ANCESTOR and his grandfather was born many generations after the child with force sensitivity was born.
     
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    Clankershot Rebel Trooper

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    Jax is ( in my fanfic) travelling with another jedi knight.
    Name: Norska
    Female
    Species: Predominantly human but has an unknown alien ancestor. Her eyes are pure glowing green and her long straight hair is naturally purple.
    Home planet: Unknown
    Weapon: Pink lightsaber
    Powers: The force
    Shes a veteran of a long battle that happened between the jedi and a sect of mandalorians. Her and Jax make quite the pair, she very rigid and tough and more quick to use intimidation. Jax is still very new to knighthood ( at the moment) and prefers using the force to sense out situations and always tries negotiating and peaceful options more often than not.
     
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    Captain Bartholomew; former Jedi knight, now a bounty Hunter and smuggler.
    Birthplace: Alderaan.
    Species: Human male.
    abilities: Force repolse, healing, mind trick.
    Weapons: a one handed orange lightsaber(my profile picture). A mo
     
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    Rev Clone

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    Oops! I accidentally posted this before it was done. Can someone delete it please?
    Here's the finished post.

    Captain Bartholomew; former Jedi knight, now a bounty Hunter and smuggler.
    Birthplace: Alderaan.
    Species: Human male.
    Personality:from first glances. Bartholomew seems like a brave, funny, witty, intelligent, cunning, and charismatic person. But in reality. Bartholomew is a very sad person.
    abilities: Force repolse, healing, mind trick.
    Weapons: a one handed orange lightsaber(my profile picture). And a modified Naboo Blaster.
    transportation: Modified Corellian Freighter with standard weaponry and upgraded light speed.
    Appearance: 6'3 average build with dark brown eyes. Graying light brown medium length hair and beard, birthmark on left side of his neck.
    outfit: standard smugglers vest, cargo pants fitted with a holster on his right leg for the Naboo Blaster. As well as a belt for the lightsaber, he wears his worn out Jedi robes and a bandanna as a way to conceal the weapons and his identity.

    Backstory
    captain Bartholomew(or simply known as Bartholomew) was born 19 years before the Clone Wars began. His mother who was a Jedi Knight died during labour. So he was raised by his father for the first 8 years of his life. His dad was an abuser and constantly beat on Bartholomew ever chance he could get. Until his father was killed by a republic trooper in front of him. Although his father did abuse him. Bartholomew still cared about his dad and swore revenge for his fallen parent.

    After a couple of weeks of living in the streets. Bartholomew was approached by a Jedi Master who offered to train him. Bartholomew surprised by the offer, asked him why. The Jedi responded and said he could feel the good within. So Bartholomew accepted, and spent 11 years training under the Jedi Master in Naboo. Before finally becoming a Jedi Knight at the young age of 19. The Jedi Master
    became one with the force shortly after.

    Bartholomew was a Jedi Knight and fought alongside other Jedi Knights during the Clone Wars. He became romantically attached to a woman name Venzalina. Who was a shop keeper in Naboo. They secretly dated for a few months. Venzalina became pregnant, she was expecting twins.

    Naboo was attacked by General Grieves and the Separatists. Bartholomew And the republic fought the Separatists for hours. After the battle the Separatists were defeated. And forced to retreat. Bartholomew went to the village Venzalina was living in to see if she was safe. But upon arriving, he found the village in ruins. And Venzalina was missing, after weeks of searching. And nothing turning up, she was assumed dead. And Bartholomew feel into deep state of depression.

    After 10 years of fighting in wars and loosing many friends and Anakin Skywalker to the Dark Side. Bartholomews depression and resentment for the JedI and dark side grew even more. The Jedi Council noticed this, and instead of helping him. They expelled him. Bartholomew was this as toying. Like he had been used by the Jedi council . And made his hatred towards them even greater.

    Bartholomew became a bounty Hunter and smuggler shortly after he was expelled. He crafted a new lightsaber which was Orange in colour And made modifications to a blaster he stole from a dead trooper.

    24 years later, he travels are the Galaxy in his ship. Taking bounties and smuggling items to different places. He does this life not because he wants to. But because it's the only way he can surpress his tragic memories.
     
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    CL-7161 "Domino" (clone male)
    Homeworld: Kamino
    Abilities: N/A
    Weapons: Z-6 rotary cannon
    Appearance: Standard 501st armor (generation 1) with helmet customized with sun visor and rangefinder

    Your usual 501st Clone Trooper since 22 BBY and has fought an entire Droideka battalion single handed. MIA since: 18 BBY, last seen on Ryloth
     
  16. DrJasonTV

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    [​IMG] Name: Jason Bryant (Demi-God)
    (New) Homeworld: Ilum
    (Favorite) Abilities: Force lightning, Force Freeze, force repulse
    Weapons: Two unstable violet sabers (left backhanded/right fronthanded, Vaapad/Ataru fighting style)
    Appearance: Half robotic body, white sleeveless clothing with purple accents, golden armor pieces, with a signature v- shaped belt. Blue kyber energy flows across his robotic limbs, enhancing his force ability.

    Jason was born to his God father, King Julius, and a human mother, queen natalah, in the unknown edge of the galaxy, where Celestial beings thrive in silence. Through the years Jason was trained in the art of combat and force using by his father, to the point of him being the second most powerful user in the Crystal kingdom( first being his father of course). As time went by, other kingdoms grew tired of the Crystal Kingdom thriving so, and they declared war on them. Long story short, the other kingdoms destroyed the Crystal kingdom and murdered the king and queen with it, leaving only a few celestials remaining, including Jason, who was ordered by his father ( before his death) to board his ship, which had predetermined coordinates to Coruscant so Jason could be trained to use his power to help the galaxy. When Jason arrived on Coruscant a few days later, he was approached by the council, and was taken on as an apprentice only because of his previous talent and training, and his positive nature. As the years went by Jason quickly obtained the rank of master, but some questioned his true origins, as he never looked to have aged in the many years that he was there, as he was strictly told by his father not to mention his godly nature to any non celestial, as they may grow suspicious of the thriving kingdoms. Jason gradually grew more and more tired of the Jedi ways of thinking, and increasingly questioned the rest of the councils decisions. He soon left the Jedi order, turning in his current lightsaber, and heading to Ilum, for he heard rumors of a special artifact deep inside. He inhabited the island and constructed 2 lightsabers from a halved purple crystal that attuned with him. 30 years went by and although he haven’t found the artifact, he decided to stay at the planet, as he grew accustomed to the bitter cold temperature and watching as younglings create their first lightsaber. One day, he was awakened by a fleet of strange ships passing over his home. He put on his gear and went out to find out what the commotion was, as youngling were only brought on one or two ships, not this many. The ships were a strange design, unknown to Jason, and he saw figures in full white suits coming out of the ships. They formed 2 lines looking towards the opening to the largest of the ships, and out walked 2 black figures. One was significantly taller, and seemed to have bulky black armor on with a strange mask, and the other was in a dark cloak with a hood covering his face.
    Jason felt strange evil and darkness radiating from the 2 figures, and he was very puzzled, as he thought the Jedi Order had security around the planet to prevent outsiders from coming and stealing the crystals. He had a sudden urge to walk up and demand what they were here for, but that seemed like a bad idea, as he didnt know the power of the 2 people, or the size of their entire army in they turned on him. Unfortunately, the one clad in black armor turned in my direction, and started towards me with a nod from the hooded one. He suddenly threw his red lightssber at me, and at that moment I knew it was a Sith. I stopped it with the force, and he looked very surprised and puzzled at the very situation, and he walked up to it and grabbed it. I ignited my 2 sabers [im really writing a story aren’t I?] and blocked his quick overhead attack. I continued to block his slow but heavy attacks until I finally parried a thrust and hit his shoulder, and leaped over him and cut off his left arm. I aimed for his waist but he moved fast and so I only got his arm. He growled and initiated a flurry of attacks which I was not prepared for and repeatedly got my abdomen and chest hit, thankfully protected by my armor. I shot a burst of lightning to stun him and lower his force barrier, then froze him for a few seconds and reluctantly retreated. I did this only because I knew if I defeated him, even with my enormous power, with that many troopers there, and especially the other Sith Lord, (apparently the master), I had only a sliver of a chance of winning, and I sure as hell wasnt takin it. I quickly reached my home, grabbed my few things and hopped in my ship, and took off at light speed. I set a course for back to Coruscant to try to get some answers, as somehow I knew, my battle with the black masked Sith was not yet over....
     

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    Hanu Mes
    Homeworld: Born Malachor V but raised in croscunt since infant
    Abilities: uses both light and dark side abilities
    Weapons: ghostfire lightsaber primary saver, secondary saber a red lightsaber.
    Appearance: human male

    Hanu Mes born on Malachor V but was raised on Coruscant. His birth parents are unknown to him. Raised as a orphan. Then one day by chance a passing Jedi noticed the young Hanu when a failed attempt of pick pocketing by Hanu via using the force ability to steal new republic credits. The Jedi took the young Hanu back to his masters and they decided to help the young Hanu to master his skills in the force.

    As a padwan Hanu showed many attributes that worried the Jedi masters but at the same time his ability to balance his mind also surprised the. But most of all his inquisitive nature for knowledge in the force as whole drove him to learn about the ghostfire crystal. Upon learning about it such existence Hanu set off to complete the trails to achieve the legendary crystal. One night he set off in a small carrier and was deemed turncoat and thought he left the order. During the years it took Hanu to obtain the crystal he learned many abilities dark and light will secluded in isolation only company was his droid partner. He learnt to use a secondary lightsaber using the force move the saber while he held another in his hand simultaneously.
    Upon his return to Corscant he was seen as a heratic and left the Jedi and became a bounty hunter named Ghost. With his abilities in both the light and the dark. He become a force user his belief is that one shouldn’t be bind to just the light or the dark but balance both the dark and the light. With his unbinded freedom Hanu roamed the galaxy doing various tasks to obtain further knowledge in the force. Upon his various journeys Hanu faced with sith and Jedi alike only to overcome due to his flexibility to stay balanced in the force.

    His appearance unravaged by the toll of the dark side using the light to heal the damage sustained from using its power. As well as him not aging past the age of 27 human years.
     
  18. Night0Ps

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    Name: Havok
    Race: Human
    Sex: Male
    Age: 25
    Height: 5'10" (177.8cm)
    Weight: 210lb. (95.25kg)
    Eye Color: Blue
    Hair Color: Blonde (kept around 4-5 inches)
    Skin Tone: Fair
    Birth Place: Serenno
    Force Abilities: Force enhanced all physical abilities and force sense out to 130ft (39.6m)
    Weapons: Bronze Lightsaber with a black hilt and custom shield gauntlet ( makes a 5ft (1.5m) tall tower plasma shield)
    Style: Master Form V (Djem style) and Form VII. Adept in Form IV
    Order: Last of the true Je'daii. Grey Jedi
    Apparel: Dura-armor and helm. primary black, secondary silver

    Although, physically abled, Havok lacks in other aspects such as using force push or mental abilities. He has learned to use his force powers to greatly enhance his overall physical capabilities. Havok studies in the way of a Grey Jedi from old Je'daii books and practices. His reaction speed is capable of deflecting force lighting within point blank range ( less than 5ft away). When he enhances his strength, Havok can breakthrough 10ft thick barrier walls and lift a large destroyer class ship. He can also leap 800ft when enhanced. When enhancing his endurance, Havok can ignore all pain and continue to preform heavily demanding tasks for 10 days without rest ( but will be disabled for 3 days afterwards). Havok travels the galaxies in a simple renovated cargo ship.

    (currently working on own personal art concept for Havok. this is just a temporary filler)
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    Former Names: Jedi Knight Abraham Viticous and Sith Lord Darth Phobos
     
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    Ok
    --- Double Post Merged, Jan 9, 2020, Original Post Date: Jan 9, 2020 ---
    So I’ve been working on a story for a while now and I think it’s good.

    name: Darth Moldarym

    apperance: pale scarred skin. Sith eyes. Black robes that feature a hood and cape.

    weapon: 1 lightsaber with a red kyber crystal that also features a curved hilt. He also carries the lightsaber of his fallen lover but does not use it in battle and hides it under his cape.

    Powers: force lightning. Force choke. Force push.

    Darth Moldarym was once a Jedi human born on Alderaan named Kwelgin Mawndu. He was a very good lightsaber duelist and was very talented in the force. but after him and a group of Jedi traveled to tattooine they were attacked by sand people. Although the other Jedi managed to escape on a ship and make the sand people flee they thought Kwelgin and Jedi girl were dead and they had to escape as soon as they could. When the two recovered they realized they had been abandoned and left to die. They two quickly fell in love while they searched for civilization together. Just as they thought they had found a town they were attacked by the same sand people. They beat down the two and took their lightsabers. then they killed Kwelgin’s lover right in front of him. Driven by anger and hatred he used the force to grab his lightsaber and killed the sand people and took his lovers lightsaber. It wasn’t long before he realized that this was all the Jedi’s fault. In that moment he turned to the dark side. When a Jedi master by the name of baba-di came to search for the corpses he tracked down Kwelgin and without hesitating Kwelgin killed the Jedi master. Kwelgin then cut off baba-di’s head and corrupted his lightsaber crystal, making it a sith red. He then took the Jedi masters head and his ship tot the sith academy and officially became a sith. He changed his name to Moldarym and after about 2 years or so he killed his sith master and proceeded to create a new lightsaber using his old sith masters red kyber crystal. He was soon granted the rank of Darth and took on the name of Darth Moldarym
     
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