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GAME Make your own Star Wars character.

Discussion in 'Gaming And Competitions' started by Darth Revan8, Jan 19, 2015.

  1. Random Dude

    Random Dude Clone

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    Species Clone/Human
    Name: Captain "Easy" / ct62528
    Wepons: Stander issue Long Rifle, Dual Pistols, and Gatling Gun as well as good ol fashioned fist.
    Job: Clone trooper in the 38th Armored Division
    Rank: Captain
    Personality: A surprisingly easy going down to earth person. Every clone he commandes learns quickly to report problems to him first as he won't be as upset or angry as other people. That's not to say he won't punish those who step to far out of line it's just to say many troopers prefer washing down AT-TE's
    over latrine duty for a month. When he actually gets serious you better hope he's not looking at you. There are still cadets running laps on kaminno that "pushed the wrong button".
    Backstory: Easy gotEgot his nameiname from his timentime asoas as a cadet when it seemed like he took nothing seriously. His friends had had enough and were about to rip him a new one when they were preparing for there final combat test when he stayed up all night and was barely able to stand but he stopped them mid-sentnce and gave the a well thought out plan while actually sounding and acting serious. Easy is not only a Captain he's a certified engineer. He even uses the Phase 2 38th battle engineer armor as the base of his armor. Speaking of armor, he wear extra armor and ammo he has an ammo clip belt and there are ammo clips on his backpack. You would think this slows him down but he's usually the first trooper in to the fight.
    He tends to relive stress and anger by going to the nearest shooting range or dead droids and emptying all his weapons on the targets the hoping the fence and beating the targets into the ground. Because of this his knuckles or like bricks and he feels no pain from the outside of his hands. He can go punch a B1 battle droid and actually do something. At the end of the day Easy's a good guy that honestly cares for not only his fellow clones but also the republic as a whole and would give his live to save anyone on his side...at least that was until Fives' death and discovery found its way around the troopers. He had no good answer to the inhebiter chip and one night attempted to remove his with the help of a friend. He didn't fire on the Jedi when order 66 happened on the contrary he hid the general he was with at the time and helped them escape.
     
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  2. Oliver Hodges

    Oliver Hodges Clone Trooper

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    Commander Steel
    ARC Trooper
    Member of the 212th battalion
    Tactical Specialist
    Led a squad into enemy territory on Felucia and captured a droid command ship
    Single handedly captured a command post which allowed the clone forces to take the capital of Umbara
    Dysfunctional inhibitor chip, so he did not get order 66.
    Was shot by fellow clones but survived.
    Eventually was shot down by fellow clones while flying stolen Y Wing.
     
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  3. Captian rex

    Captian rex Clone

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    --- Double Post Merged, Jul 2, 2020, Original Post Date: Jul 2, 2020 ---
    Captain rex
    He's a super clone
    Ability,,,Force push.
    He has the force but doesn't know how to use it.
    Has 2 blue lightsaber.
    --- Double Post Merged, Jul 2, 2020 ---
    (stormy 2)(blue)(blue)
     
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  4. Jea Dah 2003

    Jea Dah 2003 Clone

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    Name: Valhalla
    Gender: Female
    Birthplace: Glee Anselm
    Current Home: Coruscant
    Species: Nautolan
    Classification: Pod racer
    While she may at first sound and look threatening, deep down Valhalla is caring Noutolan that would sometimes look out for others. Ever since she lived in Glee Anselm, Valhalla always wanted to podrace ever she and her family went to Tatooine. Her parents are very protective of her, especially when she's podracing.
     
  5. daRinze

    daRinze Force Sensitive

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    Name: daRinze
    Gender: Male
    Birthplace: Christophsis
    Current Home: mainly his own space vessel, because always travelling from one shady place to another: Malastare, Theron, Tatooine, ...
    Specie: Human
    Classification: Public Entertainer

    When people reunite, for a dance in Pasaana, for a podrace on Malastare, for a political meeting in Coruscant, there are always numerous fries stalls and rotisserie stands everywhere in the arena. And somewhere in the nearby, here I am too. Yelling to the people, stupidly grimacing to the kids.
    I am a public entertainer. I wear that ridiculous painted stormtrooper suit, with that red nose and that red flower over my head. Inside, I pinch my nose with a clothespin in order to get a stupid duck voice.
    I bring laugh and joy around me. I say jokes, I mimic and caricature the Galactic Empire policeforce, I want the children to be happy and laugh out loud everytime they see me.
    I am a public puppet.
    The more they laugh, the more I am happy.

    Every night, when the show is done and I quit my suit, I have a blink and a thought for my master, the one who told and taught me all. He was a genius of entertainment, especially when it came to kids. Altought he was a funny guy, I always sensed a great suffering behind his mask of cheerfulness. But he never told me about his past.
    They used to call him the Clown. I used to call him Master because he gave me a goal in my life: make the children happy.
    Thank you Master Jarjar Binks. May the Force bless you.
     
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    character name : Ursa Dra'co
    gender : male
    race : Li'ong ( a race similar to humans with short horns on their heads and a lizard like tail )
    home planet : Ursa Seven ( a planet in a galaxy on the Ursa Major )
    birth : a very very long time ago before the time of the republic
    Death : a very long time ago before the time of the republic
    Death place : the old remains of Ursa Seven
    occupation while alive : Jedi / wandering force warrior
    lightsaber color : cyan / jade green
    History:

    a long time ago in a galaxy far far away...
    in the constellation of Ursa Major, there lies a galaxy the ancients called Lucefar'as. There lies a blue cloudy planet called Ursa Seven. it is the fifth planet of the system and rotates around a blue star called the azure. there are three moons on the planet. The planet is mostly filled with cyan colored liquid water ( certainly not H2O ) and several small continents of high rising rocky mountains, full of minerals and many jade colored rocks. the planet is also filled with giant trees which grows from from beneath the planet's ocean, rising towards the clouds, towering the planet's ocean with its faint glowing blue leaves. The notable habitants of this planets are the humanlike Li'ongs which live in settlements on the mountains and ocean trees, many ocean dwelling shark like creatures, pteranodons ( but how???), The giant hundred finned serpents deep below the planet oceans, li'l snake o the mountains, Plesiosaurs, and the sky ruling wyverns (which interestingly are used by the Li'ongs as mounts and warbeast) .

    The Li'ong civilization are very traditional, their swords and arrows are mostly crafted from the jade stones, and they also crafted staffs from the wood of the ocean trees. these race are amphibians, they can breathe underwater and above. Most of them are force sensitive, leading them to use the force for their magics and alchemy, they are also known to be cultist, which is the reason for wars in their history.

    now back to the story....

    Ursa Dra'co was born on the village of Qinhue'li, a village located on a part of a huge ocean tree. he is fair skinned with jade eyes and dark hair with bluish ends, he had two branched horns on his head, protruding just above his ears. he was a force sensitive and a natural force user since birth. He and his childhood friend Wyr'thras used to love diving into the depths of the planet oceans to swim with the giant hundred finned serpents. ( it is noted that the hundred finned serpent is an aggresive giant beast which is the top of the food chain in the planet's ocean, how could they??? ) at some point in their childhood, they befriended a baby giant hundred finned serpent called venti.

    One day, a tragedy happened upon the planet. an army of spaceships suddenly appeared on the outer rim of the planet, armed invaders filled the world with chaos, they fire their advanced blasters towards the villagers, their ships dropping bombs of despair, there was war everywhere, war between the mystical Li'ongs and the alien invaders from an unknown world. the mystical li'ongs stood no chance against the more advanced invaders, that is, until one ship arrived.
    from the ship emerged a hooded man, wielding an energy saber of deep blue color, a warrior and master of the force. but what can one man do against an army of many? Upon the chaos of war he saw a young child, and his fallen friend. his eyes were filled with despair.
    on that moment, the man was given a vision, a vision of an unstoppable warrior which destroyed half of the galaxy with his power rooted from hatred and despair.
    not wanting the child he saw to grow into such an evil monster, the man took the child away from the chaotic planet and hope that his teachings, the teachings of the jedi can prevent the child, from falliing towards the dark side....
     
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    Part 1 the path of jedi

    it has been years... years after the young apprentice was taken by the jedi away from his planet. he was still reminded of the day of the tragedy, and yet his most cherished memories were his childhood, his days swimming in the depths of the ocean alongside his friend wyr'thras and the giant hundred finned serpent venti.
    His days with his jedi tutor taught him to be peaceful with the past, and to not fall into the depths of hatred and vengeance. his tutor was a young jedi knight, called Ormus rex, a rising hero among the galaxy. Ormus treated Ursa Dra'co as if he was his own son...

    Ursa Dra'co enrolled into the jedi academy at the age of 9, under the recommendation of his foster father, Ormus. although considered too old for training, his natural affinity with the force and the status of his foster father allowed him to enroll. (he was about 6 or 7 when his planet was attacked)

    Ursa Draco was proficient and a natural genius in the force, however he still have many ways to go in learning the arts of the jedi, the lightsaber forms. his interest grew more towards the arts of the lightsaber, sometimes skipping his force studies to understand the way of the forms, and honing his skills with the blade. sometimes he tries to improvise, mostly experimenting the acrobatic techniques of ataru, and the counter techniques of shien. During this period, he befriended other jedi padawans, an Iktochi called Brofachti, a padawan aiming to become a jedi guardian, a prodigy in the arts of the lightsaber,
    a human called sara tythoon, a hard working padawan, aiming to be a knight of the jedi order.
    a Mirialan called leon star, a hyperactive catman with a strong sense of justice.
    at the age of 17, Ursa Dra'co and his friends took the jedi trials to become a full fledged jedi, and from there the adventure begins.
     
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  8. CTMaley

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    Character name : Selia Tosaul- Born Lira Yoth
    gender : Female
    race : Sephi
    home planet : Isobe( a large planet in the Thustra System)
    birth : 32 BBY
    occupation : Jedi / Bounty Hunter
    Weapons: Two Lightsabers and a Blaster.
    lightsabers color : Magenta & Blue.
    Blaster color: Magenta & Blue.
    History: She was the padawan of Jedi Master Shaak Ti, In 28 BBY Shaaki Ti was sent to have a meeting with the Isobe Royal Family about joining the Republic. A Bounty Hunter sent to kill the Royal Family bombed the city that the family lived in. Unfortunately Lira's parents were casualties of the bombing, Shaaki Ti was able to quickly defeat the bounty hunter. When Lira yelled in sadness over her parents dying she tapped into her connection to the force, Shaak Ti sensed it and found Lira. Even though she was too old according to the code, Shaaki Ti still trained Lira in the force. Due to Shaak Ti being one of the best teachers in the Jedi Order Lira was pretty good with a lightsaber and had a good connection to the force.

    Lira would also go on missions with Kit Fisto when the padawan would grow bored & antsy with being stuck at Kamino when her master had to oversee the clones and teach them. Lira has a close bond with her master due to Ti being a more compassionate Jedi than many others in the order. Lira was a cheerful and spontaneous person, full of energy and was able to absorb the teachings of her master really well. Lira has a strong sense of observation and can deal with other people easily.

    In 19 BBY when the now Darth Vader led the Clones to purge the Jedi temple, Shaak Ti sensed the Jedi would fail and lose the battle. Ti gave her lightsaber to Lira and told her to leave, Lira gave her master a hug with Ti saying "I'll always be with you." before Tosaul escaped the temple. Shaak Ti would be killed by Darth Vader while she was meditating. After escaping the Jedi temple she went to the Coruscant's underworld where Lira ran into Mandalorian Bounty Hunter couple Krair(husband) & Mika Tosaul(Wife) and their daughter Xia Tosaul. Lira quickly explained to the Bounty Hunter what had just happened at the Jedi Temple and begged for travel out of Coruscant, the couple choose to take Lira in and changed her name to Selia Tosaul.

    Selia's appearance- pre Jedi Purge: peach skin, green eyes, long brown hair and brown jedi robes.

    Selia's appearance- post Jedi Purge: peach skin, green eyes, medium length white hair, dark magenta jacket, dark-blue shirt & fingerless gloves, black pants & boots and a small necklace that looks similar to Shaaki Ti's jewel headdress.
     
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  9. Lord of the Rens

    Lord of the Rens HATES: Clumsy AND Stupid

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    Name: Tofi Sandeeko

    Occupation: Just Simple Man Making His Way In The Galaxy

    Species: Human Male (Mimbanese)

    Master At Arms (Melee & Ranged)

    Ion & Thermal Detonation Specialist

    Prefers Disintegration Over Carbon Freeze

    Ship: The Ozark (Small, Long Range Armored Transport)

    Favorite Watering Hole: "The Idiots Way" on Sullust

    Owns an astromech with mods galore.
     
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  10. Use the Falchion

    Use the Falchion Jedi Contrarian

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    Alias: General Sedai
    Occupation: First Order General
    Species: Human Female
    Birth Year: [The same year Luke, Leia, and Ezra were all born]
    Planet of Origin: Alderaan
    Looks: Quite similar to the Second Sister, hilariously enough (although I had her looks planned out FAR before I knew what Second Sister looked like)
    Backstory:
    General Sedai was born on Alderaan, where her father worked as a simple farmer. Her mother was a technician for the Empire. When the general was old enough, she decided to join the Empire and follow in her mother's footsteps. And then her mother was transferred to the Death Star. In rapid succession Sedai lost her father and her mother, becoming an orphan in an uncaring, unsympathetic system. But she had to believe there was a reason. So on with the Empire she went, blindly trusting in their work. Soon, she met a man who, despite all of his success and power, had lost his way. Sedai decided to help him, and in the ashes of the Empire and Operation: Cinder, the two fell in love.

    Soon after, the two were blessed with a child - a daughter with capabilities beyond what they could understand. But her husband knew, and contacted someone who could help them. Some called the man a mystic, others a monster, but Sedai knew him as one thing - Skywalker. Skywalker took their daughter away to be trained, and soon after, the First Order found them. Both Sedai and her husband joined, the former sacrificing much to become a general; and the latter a member of the Praetorian Guard before retiring from the position to become a trainer, and eventually retiring from that.
    During her time in the First Order, General Sedai was a liaison between her government and the re-forged Mandalorian government. She found many promising recruits, but none so promising as a young woman named Beru Wren. Beru went on to become a magnificent officer before defecting and disappearing. Not soon after, Sedai's husband left his wife, no longer able to live with the horrors the First Order dealt.
    That one, final betrayal, taught General Sedai the lesson she now holds dear, that order will not bring peace. Now, she uses her resources as a General to find and reforge her family, and maybe, just maybe, bring peace along the way.
     
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    Serequen Lúvatar: Jedi rogue
    Sex: female
    Species: unknown humanoid
    Home world: unknown
    Abilities: all force powers, light and dark, skilled in jar’kai, can control the elements
    Weapons: three lightsabers, one blue, one yellow, and one white double bladed lightsaber
    Appearance: two types of horns growing out of her head, blond hair, one blue eye and one gold eye with a scar on the right eye, and a black and white suit meant for mass agility

    Serequen was born during the clone wars. Her mother was killed trying to save her. She was then found by Master Di Lee, a male Zabrak. He took her in as his Padawan, teaching her the power of the force. He was then assassinated by general grievous. She then took his yellow lightsaber and went rogue, learning the light and the dark side of the force. She later has three children, Denarys, Kilo, and Artemis. She helped Luke fight Abeloth and she was mortally wounded. She later died at the age of 162. F7135DD3-17E0-47FD-8097-9DD5E7B2BF60.jpeg
     
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    Wow, that’s cool
     
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    Can you put Serequen Lúvatar in your book too please?
     
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    Name = Marco Ken

    Birthdate = bby

    Birth place = Moon of Coruscant (centax 3)

    Death place = The Alderaan mountains

    Jedi rank = jedi consular / jedi master

    Lightsaber color = cyan (padawan, jedi) Jade green with bluish outline (jedi master)



    Marco ken was a force sensitive human born on the third moon of coruscant, Centax 3. when he was still a child, his parents were killed by a sith assasin. witnessing his parent's death, his heart was filled with rage and hatred. He wasn't killed at that time as a mysterious sage appeared and defeated the sith assasin with a force wave which blasted the assasin away from the apartment, falling into the city below (presumely dead). The mysterious sage brought young marco to the jedi temple in coruscant and suddenly dissapeared.



    Time passed, and Marco learned the ways of the jedi, embracing the light side of the force, and avoiding the temptation of the dark side. But deep inside his heart, resides a deep hatred for the sith, A strong darkness that grows from time to time. However, Marco is very smart at hiding his feelings and intentions, and very careful with his mentors and peers. his lust for power and revenge led him into a person who hungers for knowledge, especially ancient knowledge. As a youngling, he was a nerd, bookish person who seemed calm on the outside, and used words of wisdom to hide his darker side from the others, he rarely spars and use most of his days reading. but at night just before dawn, he led a different life, he practiced his lightsaber forms, and occasionally, go into the slums to beat up gangsters with a vibrosword as a masked person called "sin". In his padawan days, his "darker" hobby led him into entering an underground farena as a fighter as his other identity "sin". Only here, he can express his true emotions and passion, fighting for him, is ecstatic, and this nature made him an aggressive fighter, using a flurry of strikes from form 7 and embracing the fight itself. As a padawan however, he mainly used form 2 and 3 to suppress his inner darkness.



    Years passed, and it is finally the day when Marco took the Jedi trials. As he took the trials, his master, Jedi master Mur'sahjar , was actually a sith informant, and a traitor of the Jedi order. his plan is to infiltrate the Jedi temple with his sith apprentices, disguised as his padawan, but Marco is unintentionally given to him as his Padawan and seeing Marco as a no sith material, set him up on his trials to get rid of him for good. The plan was to led him into a cave of a Giant K'lor'slug in hopes of getting him devoured. This, however failed, as Marco succesfully defeated the giant k'lor'slug to Mur'sahjar's surprise. His next attempt is to led Marco into a forest and set up an ambush by three of his sith apprentices. Marco however smiled darkly, and laugh maniacally at the Sith apprentices. he quickly drew his lightsaber and viciously attacked them, channeling his great hatred, and embracing the dark side of the force in his vicious blows. his hatred combined with his dark smile gives off an aura of terror, instilling fear into the Sith apprentices. He killed two of the assailants brutally and left one person living which escaped, without an arm. He reported this incident to his mentor, Mur'sahjar, only to instill rage in him.

    The Dark sith drew his lightsaber, his only words are, " you must die, right here, right now " he then quickly leapt towards Marco, his lightsaber right above his forehead, ready to struck Marco down. Marco suddenly changed, his calm nerdy demeanor changed into a psychopathic smile, he quickly drew his lightsaber and deflected the attack in a blink of an eye, he then used force push to create distance between him, and his opponent.

    His eyes was filled with rage, thrill, and hatred. his then said in a menacing tone, " My mentor, a Sith? how nice... this way I don't need to hide my true nature anymore, do I?. He than began his flurry of vicious strike, so vicious that his former mentor had a hard time dealing with his attacks. His experience as an underground fighter made him on par with the level of a sith warrior. "you should join us, with your talent, you can be a powerful sith lord" Mur'sahjar said. Marco only laughed maniacally upon hearing the words, his eyes glowing red with hatred. "why would I join the very thing I despise from the depths of my heart?" He then continued his vicious onslaught, and finally, successfully disarmed his former mentor. aiming his lightsaber at his former mentor, he said "I would like to slice you and cut you a million times, fill your body with holes and throw your remains into a sarlacc pit, but I don't, because I still need to be a Jedi to exterminate your kind. " He then grabbed his former mentor's head and used the impact of the force to shock him into unconsciousness.



    Knowing that Mur'sahjar was a sith, and had several apprentices with him in the jedi order, Marco quickly informed Jedi Master Forrik ming of this incident and devised a plan with the Jedi council to thwart Mur'sahjar's plan by using the Sith lord as a bait to capture his apprentices. Marco's effort in handling this incident granted him the title of a Jedi.



    Marco's early Jedi days are full of diplomatic missions, meditation, seeking knowledge. and teaching younglings in the ways of the force. one day, he discovered a Sith cult, The circle of Nocturne, operating in the mountains of Alderaan. He then informed the Jedi council and devised a plan to investigate them, a plan used by his former master, Infiltration.

    He disguised himself as a sith lord, under the identity of his former master, Mur'sahjar, with his sith name. Darth Fang. He even bought a demonic mask for this mission. in this mission. Marco had two objectives, the first one is to uncover the sith cult's intention, and wipe them out, the second is to learn the knowledge of the dark side.

    As he successfully entered the circle of nocturne. He found out that the cult was founded by a Sith lord, Darth Muok, who claimed to met a true being of the force, The pure nature of the dark force, as a sentient being. His cult is based on the belief that True darkness is death itself, and to channel the true power of the dark side, one have to went through death, understand its nature, and use death as a source of power. the cult performed many rituals that involve near death situations, sacrifice, blood offerings and suicidal actions.



    Marco's time in the cult made him understand the ways of the dark side, and with learning both the way of the dark, and the way of the light, the only thing left to pursue is the truth of the force. and to pursue the truth, he chose the hard way. He tried the cult's ritual by confronting death itself. his ritual is to drink the poison of one thousand death, and to succeed, one must die and resurrect within the span of 3 days. and thus, Marco drank the poison and died...



    THE END....



    {below is a made up philosophy, feel free to skip}



    "oh it felt so empty, lonely, and dark.... is this death? the end of everything?"

    The memories of his life started playing in front of him, from his birth, to when he lost his parents, the mysterious sage, the underground arena, his former mentor, his ascension as a jedi, his travels as a diplomat... then it all stopped, there is only the force, even in death, and the force that rule over death is the dark side, the extreme dark side of the force. and within death, the fading of one's soul. and the cause of it, the dark side, death. He then embraced the force, instead of letting he force fading his soul, he embraced it into him, and thus, becoming one with the force, but to return to life he must understand the other side of the force, the light, because the light side governs life, and true power lies in harmony, and as he experienced the extreme dark side, he must understand the extreme light side, the power of life, to understand and control life itself, creation and rebirth, through the force. and with two extremes together, harmony and balance, the truth of the force.



    ( philosophy end )



    Marco opened his eyes, the moment he returned to life he felt like a different person, with more wisdom and more power than ever. but even in harmony of the extreme, he still have hatred in his heart, he denied his inner peace and channeled the full force of the dark side towards the sith cult, making them the first victim of his newfound powers.



    After he returned to the jedi temple, he embraced his inner peace to avoid suspicion as a corrupted Jedi and reported the cult as an evil suicidal bunch which sacrifices people and animals to understand the dark side more and he had no choice but to exterminate them and their evil ideas. ( although in truth, he embraced them ). As he returned, he became an instructor in the Jedi academy, and built a library to pass his knowledge as well as to preserve the history and culture of the Jedi. At this time, Marco have not decided to take a padawan, not until 7 years later.



    One day, he met a youngling with promising intellect and decided to take her as his padawan. Her name is Luna Mirtufir, A young female miraluka. her thirst for knowledge reminded Marco of his youhful days... but then, the peaceful times are about to end... hundreds of space ships appeared, heading directly towards coruscant, the sith have made their move, and the one man behind this attack, a sith lord Darth Cathrax, former apprentice to Darth Fang (Mur'sahjar), also known as the Iron armed sorcerer. his power in the force is unrivaled among the siths, and he only ranks below the dark council. His motive: revenge.



    The jedi prepared themselves as the invaders began to land, they were an army of lightsaber wielding droids with several heavy armored sith warriors leading them, the sudden infiltration by the sith assasins also create chaos among the jedis in the temple. most of the great jedi masters are currently not in coruscant, and thus, the temple was utterly destroyed by the force of Darth Cathrax. meanwhile marco and his padawan had escaped from the chaos of the temple, they, however were confronted by Darth Cathrax himself.



    "Do you remember the humiliation you gave me years ago? This mechanical iron arm is proof of my demise, I have waited a long time for this" Darth Cathrax said



    "must we do this?" Marco said calmly



    "Ha! you are just afraid to show your true nature in front of that little girl do you?" Darth Cathrax said as he ignited his dual bladed saberstaff.



    Marco also drew his lightsaber, and perform the act of salute from form 2, "shall we? " he said with a calm smile. his eyes hiding his rage, and passion. Luna also began to ignite her lightsaber before Marco told her to stay back and watch. " a Jedi fight with peace not with emotion" Marco said to his student. but he was a liar, he always fought with passion, but he must hold back today, for the sake of his student, so she doesn't fall to the dark side like he did. and for that, he must give a proper example of how it is done. The battle played out with Darth Cathrax on the offensive and Marco on the defensive with several ripostes from form 2. although marco seemed calm, luna can sense the darkness swelling within her master and the passion that he held back. at the end, Marco succeeded in disarming Darth Cathrax again. Out of rage, he created a huge force wave, blasting Marco and his padawan away, making them fall off the cliff near the ruined jedi temple. Marco however, used his connection with the force to save him and his padawan to land into safety. Together they fled to Yavin 4, and there Luna succeded her trials as a jedi.



    Marco went into the jedi temple of yavin 4 and rebuilt his once destroyed legacy, a library of knowledge, but this time with the help of Luna. Luna on the other hand, was concerned with her master as only she, who knows that her master embraced the dark side deep within himself. One day Luna was assasinated by a sith assasin, sent by Darth Cathrax himself. Marcos, out of despair, lost all his composure, and began his hunt for the dark lord of the sith. Luna was not only his student, but he saw her as a family, and secretly held feelings for her, although she was a student, she was wise, and at times reminded him to always walk the right path, with her killed by the sith, his hatred grew more stronger, and he only wants to kill Darth Cathrax and any other sith alive.



    His final battle with Darth Cathrax was at the icy peak of a mountain in belsavis. Now totally embracing his hatred and anger, He confronted the Sith with his lightsaber.

    "you are a jedi, but impure, you had even fallen to the dark side, from the day you were born, that evil in your eyes showed it. " Darth Cathrax said, as he ignite his saberstaff.

    Marco then attacked Darth Cathrax viciously, His hatred and anger stronger than ever.

    "you killed my apprentice! you killed her! you killed her!" he shouted as he swung his lightsaber viciously, tears dropping from his eyes.

    "now that is despair you felt, just like the despair I felt years ago because of you" Darth Cathrax said as he blasted Marco with a Force wave. The sith then proceed to use lightning, only to be deflected by the fallen jedi. Marco channeled the force, becoming one with it, he then moved with godly speed, every blow of his lightsaber is followed with a force blast, but Darth Cathrax could still hold his own. his connection with the dark side of the force is just as strong as marco's. Its a duel of pure rage and anger, both of them fought aggresively with one another. the duel was long, but finally Darth Cathrax was hit hard with the force from Marco's attack.

    "now you die!" Marco said as he raised his light saber to finish off Darth Cathrax.

    "its a shame that you won't continue to exist longer, my assasin is about to kill you, the person you are in the past" Darth Cathrax said smiling.

    "what do you mean?" Marco asked, but the moment he spoke Darth Cathrax quickly struck Marco with his saberstaff, although marco managed to evade in on the last minute, only grazing his body.

    "the ritual of reversal" Darth Cathrax said

    "I will not die, not before I kill you!" Marco shouted, attacking Darth Cathrax viciously, and finally cutting through his Saberstaff, destroying it. He then prepared to make his last move, a final strike to Darth Cathrax. but before that, his mind was filled with flashback of his time with his padawan. all their times together and how his student was concerned with the dark side swelling inside him. and finally he thought, 'is this what Luna wanted?' 'is revenge the true way to solve things?' ' all this time in my life, I was living tortured by the hatred and anger inside me... and since that time, i had turned into a madman, pretending to be a jedi, but with a heart of a sith, it makes me no different to the thing I despise, hatred is not the way, peace can only be truly accepted through, forgiveness.' and thus, Marco withdrew his lightsaber and grabbed Darth Cathrax with his arm. "you will forget everything and live in redemption" Marco said as he shock Darth Cathrax with the force, wiping his memory and making him fell unconscious. The Ritual of reversal in the other hand was actually learned by Marco a long time ago... but he did not try to perform it as it could create loopholes and even complex paradox. But to stop Darth Cathrax's assassin from distorting the dimension, He had no choice but to perform the ritual and return to the past, which in his surprise, went back into the time where he saw his parents killed with his own two eyes. The assasin then went after the young child. Marco this time, with a sense of duty, used a huge force wave to blast the sith assasin, throwing him off the apartment, he then said to the child before taking him to the jedi temple in coruscant . "don't fill your heart with hatred, find inner peace"....



    Marco spent the rest of his life in the mountains of Alderaan as a sage, teaching the truth of the force... and one of his disciple became the future leader of the Sith cult Circle of nocturne.
     
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  15. Bet Alias

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    This is like a prequel to an actual novel I am currently working on. My plan is to release it as an audible and in hard copy form in November of 2022. The characters mentioned here derive from that book. What's written here is basically a prologue or a prequel to my as of right now untitled upcoming novel. I'm doing this to hopefully recieve some feedback on the character development. I wish I had some artworks for y'all but, I have no talent for that. I hope you all like it and thank you to anyone who decides to read this! I highly appreciate it!


    Name: Betharda Alias (pronounced "BETH-THAR-DAH AH-LIE-ISS")
    Race: Mirialan
    Species: Humanoid
    Gender/Sex: Female
    Occupation: Padawan Learner, Jedi Knight, Pilot
    Homeworld: Planet of Coruscant
    Abilities: Force Choke, Force Lightning, Force Aura, Force Lift, etc
    Weapons: First 1 Singular Green Lightsaber (Age 10-13), Second 2 Green Lightsabers (Age 14-15), Third 1 Double-Bladed Green Lightsaber

    Betharda Alias was born to the Alias clan on the planet of Mirial in 39 BBY. Before she was born her parents' village was raided by pirates and they were left with nothing after their home had been destroyed amidst the chaos. Betharda's parents were offered a deal where they would have to do one odd job in exchange for the chance to be smuggled off the planet by some mercenaries working for The Trade Federation. All they wanted was protection against the pirates. Betharda's parents went through with the odd job they were given which in turn eventually allowed for them to be smuggled to Coruscant where they could seek refuge and start over. Betharda who they nicknamed "Bet" was born shortly after they settled on Coruscant. Bet's parents then made a promise to pay back whatever credits they owed to The Trade Federation. It wasn't long before the Alias' were hunted down and taken prisoner at the hands of The Trade Federation when they hadn't coughed up the credits they owed. As Bet's parents were killed, she was sold to be a slave for the very same pirates that raided her home village on Mirial. Bet was a slave for nearly 7 years before she would be rescued by none other than Jedi Master Mace Windu. Master Mace Windu could sense how powerful the young Mirialan was in the ways of the force. Although her future remained cloudy, he knew she would make a great asset to the Jedi. He decided to take her back to Coruscant with him to train at the Jedi Temple. She was brought forth to the great Jedi council where she was later sent to be trained under the guidance of grand Master Yoda.

    She was a student in the Jedi Temple for nearly 3 years before she was promoted to the title of padawan. Everyone knew it was a Mirialan tradition for Mirialan jedi masters to take on other Mirialans as their padawans but, there were no available Mirialan jedi masters, so it was quite a while before the Jedi council could find her a master. Months had passed before the council had found the perfect master for Bet, a young female Twi'lek named Lo Motta. Because of Bet's childhood she was never aware of the Mirialan jedi traditions and didn't seem to care if she wasn't given another Mirialan to be her teacher. But, Lo Motta was well aware of the Mirialan jedi traditions, so she found it quite peculiar that the jedi council offered Bet to be her padawan. At first Lo Motta was hesitant and tried everything she could to help find another Mirialan jedi master for Bet. But to no avail, she decided to accept Bet as her padawan and the two got along famously from the start.


    Bet was Master Lo Motta's padawan learner from the age of 10 to the age of 17. She would go on countless missions with Master Lo Motta all across the galaxy. There were plenty of times where Master Lo Motta or Bet would be nearly killed, captured or imprisoned by enemy forces and one would have to rescue the other. A short time before Order 66 had been enacted Master Lo Motta and bet were sent on a private mission, by the Chancellor to arrest separatist criminal Admiral Zanja, an assistant to Captain Trench. Although the mission was for both Bet and Master Lo Motta, Master Lo Motta had given Bet her own side mission to do herself while she took her clone squadron, The 408th Legion, with her to help assist in the arrest of Admiral Zanja. Bet’s mission was to travel to the planet of Mandalore and pick up some supplies for their next mission. Bet argued with Master Lo Motta and begged and pleaded to be taken with her but Master Lo Motta was not caving in to Bet’s demands. Although Bet desperately wanted to go alongside Master Lo Motta, she agreed to the mission she was given and took a ship to Mandalore alone.

    It was at this time that Chancellor Palpatine had enacted Order 66 but the story doesn’t end there.
     
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    Darth Grem; sith lord (kaleesh male)
    Homeworld: kalee
    Abilities: force choke, saber spin, force lightning
    Weapons: four red lightsabers
    Appearance: has a strong resemblance to General Grievous but with red armor
    (also cyborg)
     
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    Aramis: Former Jedi Sentinel (Temple Guard) now bounty hunter, (Chiss Female), 16 during order 66
    Homeworld: Csilla
    Abilities: force punish (light side lightning), force crush, force push, mind trick, force pill
    Weapons: A double bladed gold light saber and a DC15A Blaster Carbine
    Appearance: wears Temple Guard Robes with articles of Coruscant guard armor on top , black hair

    Background: Joined the temple guard a few days before operation nightfall, dueled the future grand inquisitor and escaped only to nearly be killed by Anakin, a Jedi she looked up to. When she regained consciousness she was outside of the temple surrounded by Coruscant Guard, she killed them and escaped the planet. Since then she has worked as a mercenary, though she spends much of her time either outright attacking imperial interests or helping rebels and Jedi survivors.
     
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