GAME Make your own Star Wars character.

Commander Steel
ARC Trooper
Member of the 212th battalion
Tactical Specialist
Led a squad into enemy territory on Felucia and captured a droid command ship
Single handedly captured a command post which allowed the clone forces to take the capital of Umbara
Dysfunctional inhibitor chip, so he did not get order 66.
Was shot by fellow clones but survived.
Eventually was shot down by fellow clones while flying stolen Y Wing.

 

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Captain rex
He's a super clone
Ability,,,Force push.
He has the force but doesn't know how to use it.
Has 2 blue lightsaber.

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Name: Valhalla
Gender: Female
Birthplace: Glee Anselm
Current Home: Coruscant
Species: Nautolan
Classification: Pod racer
While she may at first sound and look threatening, deep down Valhalla is caring Noutolan that would sometimes look out for others. Ever since she lived in Glee Anselm, Valhalla always wanted to podrace ever she and her family went to Tatooine. Her parents are very protective of her, especially when she's podracing.

 

Name: daRinze
Gender: Male
Birthplace: Christophsis
Current Home: mainly his own space vessel, because always travelling from one shady place to another: Malastare, Theron, Tatooine, ...
Specie: Human
Classification: Public Entertainer

When people reunite, for a dance in Pasaana, for a podrace on Malastare, for a political meeting in Coruscant, there are always numerous fries stalls and rotisserie stands everywhere in the arena. And somewhere in the nearby, here I am too. Yelling to the people, stupidly grimacing to the kids.
I am a public entertainer. I wear that ridiculous painted stormtrooper suit, with that red nose and that red flower over my head. Inside, I pinch my nose with a clothespin in order to get a stupid duck voice.
I bring laugh and joy around me. I say jokes, I mimic and caricature the Galactic Empire policeforce, I want the children to be happy and laugh out loud everytime they see me.
I am a public puppet.
The more they laugh, the more I am happy.

Every night, when the show is done and I quit my suit, I have a blink and a thought for my master, the one who told and taught me all. He was a genius of entertainment, especially when it came to kids. Altought he was a funny guy, I always sensed a great suffering behind his mask of cheerfulness. But he never told me about his past.
They used to call him the Clown. I used to call him Master because he gave me a goal in my life: make the children happy.
Thank you Master Jarjar Binks. May the Force bless you.

 

character name : Ursa Dra'co
gender : male
race : Li'ong ( a race similar to humans with short horns on their heads and a lizard like tail )
home planet : Ursa Seven ( a planet in a galaxy on the Ursa Major )
birth : a very very long time ago before the time of the republic
Death : a very long time ago before the time of the republic
Death place : the old remains of Ursa Seven
occupation while alive : Jedi / wandering force warrior
lightsaber color : cyan / jade green
History:

a long time ago in a galaxy far far away...
in the constellation of Ursa Major, there lies a galaxy the ancients called Lucefar'as. There lies a blue cloudy planet called Ursa Seven. it is the fifth planet of the system and rotates around a blue star called the azure. there are three moons on the planet. The planet is mostly filled with cyan colored liquid water ( certainly not H2O ) and several small continents of high rising rocky mountains, full of minerals and many jade colored rocks. the planet is also filled with giant trees which grows from from beneath the planet's ocean, rising towards the clouds, towering the planet's ocean with its faint glowing blue leaves. The notable habitants of this planets are the humanlike Li'ongs which live in settlements on the mountains and ocean trees, many ocean dwelling shark like creatures, pteranodons ( but how???), The giant hundred finned serpents deep below the planet oceans, li'l snake o the mountains, Plesiosaurs, and the sky ruling wyverns (which interestingly are used by the Li'ongs as mounts and warbeast) .

The Li'ong civilization are very traditional, their swords and arrows are mostly crafted from the jade stones, and they also crafted staffs from the wood of the ocean trees. these race are amphibians, they can breathe underwater and above. Most of them are force sensitive, leading them to use the force for their magics and alchemy, they are also known to be cultist, which is the reason for wars in their history.

now back to the story....

Ursa Dra'co was born on the village of Qinhue'li, a village located on a part of a huge ocean tree. he is fair skinned with jade eyes and dark hair with bluish ends, he had two branched horns on his head, protruding just above his ears. he was a force sensitive and a natural force user since birth. He and his childhood friend Wyr'thras used to love diving into the depths of the planet oceans to swim with the giant hundred finned serpents. ( it is noted that the hundred finned serpent is an aggresive giant beast which is the top of the food chain in the planet's ocean, how could they??? ) at some point in their childhood, they befriended a baby giant hundred finned serpent called venti.

One day, a tragedy happened upon the planet. an army of spaceships suddenly appeared on the outer rim of the planet, armed invaders filled the world with chaos, they fire their advanced blasters towards the villagers, their ships dropping bombs of despair, there was war everywhere, war between the mystical Li'ongs and the alien invaders from an unknown world. the mystical li'ongs stood no chance against the more advanced invaders, that is, until one ship arrived.
from the ship emerged a hooded man, wielding an energy saber of deep blue color, a warrior and master of the force. but what can one man do against an army of many? Upon the chaos of war he saw a young child, and his fallen friend. his eyes were filled with despair.
on that moment, the man was given a vision, a vision of an unstoppable warrior which destroyed half of the galaxy with his power rooted from hatred and despair.
not wanting the child he saw to grow into such an evil monster, the man took the child away from the chaotic planet and hope that his teachings, the teachings of the jedi can prevent the child, from falliing towards the dark side....

 

Part 1 the path of jedi

it has been years... years after the young apprentice was taken by the jedi away from his planet. he was still reminded of the day of the tragedy, and yet his most cherished memories were his childhood, his days swimming in the depths of the ocean alongside his friend wyr'thras and the giant hundred finned serpent venti.
His days with his jedi tutor taught him to be peaceful with the past, and to not fall into the depths of hatred and vengeance. his tutor was a young jedi knight, called Ormus rex, a rising hero among the galaxy. Ormus treated Ursa Dra'co as if he was his own son...

Ursa Dra'co enrolled into the jedi academy at the age of 9, under the recommendation of his foster father, Ormus. although considered too old for training, his natural affinity with the force and the status of his foster father allowed him to enroll. (he was about 6 or 7 when his planet was attacked)

Ursa Draco was proficient and a natural genius in the force, however he still have many ways to go in learning the arts of the jedi, the lightsaber forms. his interest grew more towards the arts of the lightsaber, sometimes skipping his force studies to understand the way of the forms, and honing his skills with the blade. sometimes he tries to improvise, mostly experimenting the acrobatic techniques of ataru, and the counter techniques of shien. During this period, he befriended other jedi padawans, an Iktochi called Brofachti, a padawan aiming to become a jedi guardian, a prodigy in the arts of the lightsaber,
a human called sara tythoon, a hard working padawan, aiming to be a knight of the jedi order.
a Mirialan called leon star, a hyperactive catman with a strong sense of justice.
at the age of 17, Ursa Dra'co and his friends took the jedi trials to become a full fledged jedi, and from there the adventure begins.

 

Character name : Selia Tosaul- Born Lira Yoth
gender : Female
race : Sephi
home planet : Isobe( a large planet in the Thustra System)
birth : 32 BBY
occupation : Jedi / Bounty Hunter
Weapons: Two Lightsabers and a Blaster.
lightsabers color : Magenta & Blue.
Blaster color: Magenta & Blue.
History: She was the padawan of Jedi Master Shaak Ti, In 28 BBY Shaaki Ti was sent to have a meeting with the Isobe Royal Family about joining the Republic. A Bounty Hunter sent to kill the Royal Family bombed the city that the family lived in. Unfortunately Lira's parents were casualties of the bombing, Shaaki Ti was able to quickly defeat the bounty hunter. When Lira yelled in sadness over her parents dying she tapped into her connection to the force, Shaak Ti sensed it and found Lira. Even though she was too old according to the code, Shaaki Ti still trained Lira in the force. Due to Shaak Ti being one of the best teachers in the Jedi Order Lira was pretty good with a lightsaber and had a good connection to the force.

Lira would also go on missions with Kit Fisto when the padawan would grow bored & antsy with being stuck at Kamino when her master had to oversee the clones and teach them. Lira has a close bond with her master due to Ti being a more compassionate Jedi than many others in the order. Lira was a cheerful and spontaneous person, full of energy and was able to absorb the teachings of her master really well. Lira has a strong sense of observation and can deal with other people easily.

In 19 BBY when the now Darth Vader led the Clones to purge the Jedi temple, Shaak Ti sensed the Jedi would fail and lose the battle. Ti gave her lightsaber to Lira and told her to leave, Lira gave her master a hug with Ti saying "I'll always be with you." before Tosaul escaped the temple. Shaak Ti would be killed by Darth Vader while she was meditating. After escaping the Jedi temple she went to the Coruscant's underworld where Lira ran into Mandalorian Bounty Hunter couple Krair(husband) & Mika Tosaul(Wife) and their daughter Xia Tosaul. Lira quickly explained to the Bounty Hunter what had just happened at the Jedi Temple and begged for travel out of Coruscant, the couple choose to take Lira in and changed her name to Selia Tosaul.

Selia's appearance- pre Jedi Purge: peach skin, green eyes, long brown hair and brown jedi robes.

Selia's appearance- post Jedi Purge: peach skin, green eyes, medium length white hair, dark magenta jacket, dark-blue shirt & fingerless gloves, black pants & boots and a small necklace that looks similar to Shaaki Ti's jewel headdress.

 

Name: Tofi Sandeeko

Occupation: Just Simple Man Making His Way In The Galaxy

Species: Human Male (Mimbanese)

Master At Arms (Melee & Ranged)

Ion & Thermal Detonation Specialist

Prefers Disintegration Over Carbon Freeze

Ship: The Ozark (Small, Long Range Armored Transport)

Favorite Watering Hole: "The Idiots Way" on Sullust

Owns an astromech with mods galore.

 

Alias: General Sedai
Occupation: First Order General
Species: Human Female
Birth Year: [The same year Luke, Leia, and Ezra were all born]
Planet of Origin: Alderaan
Looks: Quite similar to the Second Sister, hilariously enough (although I had her looks planned out FAR before I knew what Second Sister looked like)
Backstory:
General Sedai was born on Alderaan, where her father worked as a simple farmer. Her mother was a technician for the Empire. When the general was old enough, she decided to join the Empire and follow in her mother's footsteps. And then her mother was transferred to the Death Star. In rapid succession Sedai lost her father and her mother, becoming an orphan in an uncaring, unsympathetic system. But she had to believe there was a reason. So on with the Empire she went, blindly trusting in their work. Soon, she met a man who, despite all of his success and power, had lost his way. Sedai decided to help him, and in the ashes of the Empire and Operation: Cinder, the two fell in love.

Soon after, the two were blessed with a child - a daughter with capabilities beyond what they could understand. But her husband knew, and contacted someone who could help them. Some called the man a mystic, others a monster, but Sedai knew him as one thing - Skywalker. Skywalker took their daughter away to be trained, and soon after, the First Order found them. Both Sedai and her husband joined, the former sacrificing much to become a general; and the latter a member of the Praetorian Guard before retiring from the position to become a trainer, and eventually retiring from that.
During her time in the First Order, General Sedai was a liaison between her government and the re-forged Mandalorian government. She found many promising recruits, but none so promising as a young woman named Beru Wren. Beru went on to become a magnificent officer before defecting and disappearing. Not soon after, Sedai's husband left his wife, no longer able to live with the horrors the First Order dealt.
That one, final betrayal, taught General Sedai the lesson she now holds dear, that order will not bring peace. Now, she uses her resources as a General to find and reforge her family, and maybe, just maybe, bring peace along the way.

 

Serequen Lúvatar: Jedi rogue
Sex: female
Species: unknown humanoid
Home world: unknown
Abilities: all force powers, light and dark, skilled in jar’kai, can control the elements
Weapons: three lightsabers, one blue, one yellow, and one white double bladed lightsaber
Appearance: two types of horns growing out of her head, blond hair, one blue eye and one gold eye with a scar on the right eye, and a black and white suit meant for mass agility

Serequen was born during the clone wars. Her mother was killed trying to save her. She was then found by Master Di Lee, a male Zabrak. He took her in as his Padawan, teaching her the power of the force. He was then assassinated by general grievous. She then took his yellow lightsaber and went rogue, learning the light and the dark side of the force. She later has three children, Denarys, Kilo, and Artemis. She helped Luke fight Abeloth and she was mortally wounded. She later died at the age of 162.

 

Wow, that’s cool

 

Can you put Serequen Lúvatar in your book too please?

 

Name = Marco Ken

Birthdate = bby

Birth place = Moon of Coruscant (centax 3)

Death place = The Alderaan mountains

Jedi rank = jedi consular / jedi master

Lightsaber color = cyan (padawan, jedi) Jade green with bluish outline (jedi master)



Marco ken was a force sensitive human born on the third moon of coruscant, Centax 3. when he was still a child, his parents were killed by a sith assasin. witnessing his parent's death, his heart was filled with rage and hatred. He wasn't killed at that time as a mysterious sage appeared and defeated the sith assasin with a force wave which blasted the assasin away from the apartment, falling into the city below (presumely dead). The mysterious sage brought young marco to the jedi temple in coruscant and suddenly dissapeared.



Time passed, and Marco learned the ways of the jedi, embracing the light side of the force, and avoiding the temptation of the dark side. But deep inside his heart, resides a deep hatred for the sith, A strong darkness that grows from time to time. However, Marco is very smart at hiding his feelings and intentions, and very careful with his mentors and peers. his lust for power and revenge led him into a person who hungers for knowledge, especially ancient knowledge. As a youngling, he was a nerd, bookish person who seemed calm on the outside, and used words of wisdom to hide his darker side from the others, he rarely spars and use most of his days reading. but at night just before dawn, he led a different life, he practiced his lightsaber forms, and occasionally, go into the slums to beat up gangsters with a vibrosword as a masked person called "sin". In his padawan days, his "darker" hobby led him into entering an underground farena as a fighter as his other identity "sin". Only here, he can express his true emotions and passion, fighting for him, is ecstatic, and this nature made him an aggressive fighter, using a flurry of strikes from form 7 and embracing the fight itself. As a padawan however, he mainly used form 2 and 3 to suppress his inner darkness.



Years passed, and it is finally the day when Marco took the Jedi trials. As he took the trials, his master, Jedi master Mur'sahjar , was actually a sith informant, and a traitor of the Jedi order. his plan is to infiltrate the Jedi temple with his sith apprentices, disguised as his padawan, but Marco is unintentionally given to him as his Padawan and seeing Marco as a no sith material, set him up on his trials to get rid of him for good. The plan was to led him into a cave of a Giant K'lor'slug in hopes of getting him devoured. This, however failed, as Marco succesfully defeated the giant k'lor'slug to Mur'sahjar's surprise. His next attempt is to led Marco into a forest and set up an ambush by three of his sith apprentices. Marco however smiled darkly, and laugh maniacally at the Sith apprentices. he quickly drew his lightsaber and viciously attacked them, channeling his great hatred, and embracing the dark side of the force in his vicious blows. his hatred combined with his dark smile gives off an aura of terror, instilling fear into the Sith apprentices. He killed two of the assailants brutally and left one person living which escaped, without an arm. He reported this incident to his mentor, Mur'sahjar, only to instill rage in him.

The Dark sith drew his lightsaber, his only words are, " you must die, right here, right now " he then quickly leapt towards Marco, his lightsaber right above his forehead, ready to struck Marco down. Marco suddenly changed, his calm nerdy demeanor changed into a psychopathic smile, he quickly drew his lightsaber and deflected the attack in a blink of an eye, he then used force push to create distance between him, and his opponent.

His eyes was filled with rage, thrill, and hatred. his then said in a menacing tone, " My mentor, a Sith? how nice... this way I don't need to hide my true nature anymore, do I?. He than began his flurry of vicious strike, so vicious that his former mentor had a hard time dealing with his attacks. His experience as an underground fighter made him on par with the level of a sith warrior. "you should join us, with your talent, you can be a powerful sith lord" Mur'sahjar said. Marco only laughed maniacally upon hearing the words, his eyes glowing red with hatred. "why would I join the very thing I despise from the depths of my heart?" He then continued his vicious onslaught, and finally, successfully disarmed his former mentor. aiming his lightsaber at his former mentor, he said "I would like to slice you and cut you a million times, fill your body with holes and throw your remains into a sarlacc pit, but I don't, because I still need to be a Jedi to exterminate your kind. " He then grabbed his former mentor's head and used the impact of the force to shock him into unconsciousness.



Knowing that Mur'sahjar was a sith, and had several apprentices with him in the jedi order, Marco quickly informed Jedi Master Forrik ming of this incident and devised a plan with the Jedi council to thwart Mur'sahjar's plan by using the Sith lord as a bait to capture his apprentices. Marco's effort in handling this incident granted him the title of a Jedi.



Marco's early Jedi days are full of diplomatic missions, meditation, seeking knowledge. and teaching younglings in the ways of the force. one day, he discovered a Sith cult, The circle of Nocturne, operating in the mountains of Alderaan. He then informed the Jedi council and devised a plan to investigate them, a plan used by his former master, Infiltration.

He disguised himself as a sith lord, under the identity of his former master, Mur'sahjar, with his sith name. Darth Fang. He even bought a demonic mask for this mission. in this mission. Marco had two objectives, the first one is to uncover the sith cult's intention, and wipe them out, the second is to learn the knowledge of the dark side.

As he successfully entered the circle of nocturne. He found out that the cult was founded by a Sith lord, Darth Muok, who claimed to met a true being of the force, The pure nature of the dark force, as a sentient being. His cult is based on the belief that True darkness is death itself, and to channel the true power of the dark side, one have to went through death, understand its nature, and use death as a source of power. the cult performed many rituals that involve near death situations, sacrifice, blood offerings and suicidal actions.



Marco's time in the cult made him understand the ways of the dark side, and with learning both the way of the dark, and the way of the light, the only thing left to pursue is the truth of the force. and to pursue the truth, he chose the hard way. He tried the cult's ritual by confronting death itself. his ritual is to drink the poison of one thousand death, and to succeed, one must die and resurrect within the span of 3 days. and thus, Marco drank the poison and died...



THE END....



{below is a made up philosophy, feel free to skip}



"oh it felt so empty, lonely, and dark.... is this death? the end of everything?"

The memories of his life started playing in front of him, from his birth, to when he lost his parents, the mysterious sage, the underground arena, his former mentor, his ascension as a jedi, his travels as a diplomat... then it all stopped, there is only the force, even in death, and the force that rule over death is the dark side, the extreme dark side of the force. and within death, the fading of one's soul. and the cause of it, the dark side, death. He then embraced the force, instead of letting he force fading his soul, he embraced it into him, and thus, becoming one with the force, but to return to life he must understand the other side of the force, the light, because the light side governs life, and true power lies in harmony, and as he experienced the extreme dark side, he must understand the extreme light side, the power of life, to understand and control life itself, creation and rebirth, through the force. and with two extremes together, harmony and balance, the truth of the force.



( philosophy end )



Marco opened his eyes, the moment he returned to life he felt like a different person, with more wisdom and more power than ever. but even in harmony of the extreme, he still have hatred in his heart, he denied his inner peace and channeled the full force of the dark side towards the sith cult, making them the first victim of his newfound powers.



After he returned to the jedi temple, he embraced his inner peace to avoid suspicion as a corrupted Jedi and reported the cult as an evil suicidal bunch which sacrifices people and animals to understand the dark side more and he had no choice but to exterminate them and their evil ideas. ( although in truth, he embraced them ). As he returned, he became an instructor in the Jedi academy, and built a library to pass his knowledge as well as to preserve the history and culture of the Jedi. At this time, Marco have not decided to take a padawan, not until 7 years later.



One day, he met a youngling with promising intellect and decided to take her as his padawan. Her name is Luna Mirtufir, A young female miraluka. her thirst for knowledge reminded Marco of his youhful days... but then, the peaceful times are about to end... hundreds of space ships appeared, heading directly towards coruscant, the sith have made their move, and the one man behind this attack, a sith lord Darth Cathrax, former apprentice to Darth Fang (Mur'sahjar), also known as the Iron armed sorcerer. his power in the force is unrivaled among the siths, and he only ranks below the dark council. His motive: revenge.



The jedi prepared themselves as the invaders began to land, they were an army of lightsaber wielding droids with several heavy armored sith warriors leading them, the sudden infiltration by the sith assasins also create chaos among the jedis in the temple. most of the great jedi masters are currently not in coruscant, and thus, the temple was utterly destroyed by the force of Darth Cathrax. meanwhile marco and his padawan had escaped from the chaos of the temple, they, however were confronted by Darth Cathrax himself.



"Do you remember the humiliation you gave me years ago? This mechanical iron arm is proof of my demise, I have waited a long time for this" Darth Cathrax said



"must we do this?" Marco said calmly



"Ha! you are just afraid to show your true nature in front of that little girl do you?" Darth Cathrax said as he ignited his dual bladed saberstaff.



Marco also drew his lightsaber, and perform the act of salute from form 2, "shall we? " he said with a calm smile. his eyes hiding his rage, and passion. Luna also began to ignite her lightsaber before Marco told her to stay back and watch. " a Jedi fight with peace not with emotion" Marco said to his student. but he was a liar, he always fought with passion, but he must hold back today, for the sake of his student, so she doesn't fall to the dark side like he did. and for that, he must give a proper example of how it is done. The battle played out with Darth Cathrax on the offensive and Marco on the defensive with several ripostes from form 2. although marco seemed calm, luna can sense the darkness swelling within her master and the passion that he held back. at the end, Marco succeeded in disarming Darth Cathrax again. Out of rage, he created a huge force wave, blasting Marco and his padawan away, making them fall off the cliff near the ruined jedi temple. Marco however, used his connection with the force to save him and his padawan to land into safety. Together they fled to Yavin 4, and there Luna succeded her trials as a jedi.



Marco went into the jedi temple of yavin 4 and rebuilt his once destroyed legacy, a library of knowledge, but this time with the help of Luna. Luna on the other hand, was concerned with her master as only she, who knows that her master embraced the dark side deep within himself. One day Luna was assasinated by a sith assasin, sent by Darth Cathrax himself. Marcos, out of despair, lost all his composure, and began his hunt for the dark lord of the sith. Luna was not only his student, but he saw her as a family, and secretly held feelings for her, although she was a student, she was wise, and at times reminded him to always walk the right path, with her killed by the sith, his hatred grew more stronger, and he only wants to kill Darth Cathrax and any other sith alive.



His final battle with Darth Cathrax was at the icy peak of a mountain in belsavis. Now totally embracing his hatred and anger, He confronted the Sith with his lightsaber.

"you are a jedi, but impure, you had even fallen to the dark side, from the day you were born, that evil in your eyes showed it. " Darth Cathrax said, as he ignite his saberstaff.

Marco then attacked Darth Cathrax viciously, His hatred and anger stronger than ever.

"you killed my apprentice! you killed her! you killed her!" he shouted as he swung his lightsaber viciously, tears dropping from his eyes.

"now that is despair you felt, just like the despair I felt years ago because of you" Darth Cathrax said as he blasted Marco with a Force wave. The sith then proceed to use lightning, only to be deflected by the fallen jedi. Marco channeled the force, becoming one with it, he then moved with godly speed, every blow of his lightsaber is followed with a force blast, but Darth Cathrax could still hold his own. his connection with the dark side of the force is just as strong as marco's. Its a duel of pure rage and anger, both of them fought aggresively with one another. the duel was long, but finally Darth Cathrax was hit hard with the force from Marco's attack.

"now you die!" Marco said as he raised his light saber to finish off Darth Cathrax.

"its a shame that you won't continue to exist longer, my assasin is about to kill you, the person you are in the past" Darth Cathrax said smiling.

"what do you mean?" Marco asked, but the moment he spoke Darth Cathrax quickly struck Marco with his saberstaff, although marco managed to evade in on the last minute, only grazing his body.

"the ritual of reversal" Darth Cathrax said

"I will not die, not before I kill you!" Marco shouted, attacking Darth Cathrax viciously, and finally cutting through his Saberstaff, destroying it. He then prepared to make his last move, a final strike to Darth Cathrax. but before that, his mind was filled with flashback of his time with his padawan. all their times together and how his student was concerned with the dark side swelling inside him. and finally he thought, 'is this what Luna wanted?' 'is revenge the true way to solve things?' ' all this time in my life, I was living tortured by the hatred and anger inside me... and since that time, i had turned into a madman, pretending to be a jedi, but with a heart of a sith, it makes me no different to the thing I despise, hatred is not the way, peace can only be truly accepted through, forgiveness.' and thus, Marco withdrew his lightsaber and grabbed Darth Cathrax with his arm. "you will forget everything and live in redemption" Marco said as he shock Darth Cathrax with the force, wiping his memory and making him fell unconscious. The Ritual of reversal in the other hand was actually learned by Marco a long time ago... but he did not try to perform it as it could create loopholes and even complex paradox. But to stop Darth Cathrax's assassin from distorting the dimension, He had no choice but to perform the ritual and return to the past, which in his surprise, went back into the time where he saw his parents killed with his own two eyes. The assasin then went after the young child. Marco this time, with a sense of duty, used a huge force wave to blast the sith assasin, throwing him off the apartment, he then said to the child before taking him to the jedi temple in coruscant . "don't fill your heart with hatred, find inner peace"....



Marco spent the rest of his life in the mountains of Alderaan as a sage, teaching the truth of the force... and one of his disciple became the future leader of the Sith cult Circle of nocturne.

 

This is like a prequel to an actual novel I am currently working on. My plan is to release it as an audible and in hard copy form in November of 2022. The characters mentioned here derive from that book. What's written here is basically a prologue or a prequel to my as of right now untitled upcoming novel. I'm doing this to hopefully recieve some feedback on the character development. I wish I had some artworks for y'all but, I have no talent for that. I hope you all like it and thank you to anyone who decides to read this! I highly appreciate it!


Name: Betharda Alias (pronounced "BETH-THAR-DAH AH-LIE-ISS")
Race: Mirialan
Species: Humanoid
Gender/Sex: Female
Occupation: Padawan Learner, Jedi Knight, Pilot
Homeworld: Planet of Coruscant
Abilities: Force Choke, Force Lightning, Force Aura, Force Lift, etc
Weapons: First 1 Singular Green Lightsaber (Age 10-13), Second 2 Green Lightsabers (Age 14-15), Third 1 Double-Bladed Green Lightsaber

Betharda Alias was born to the Alias clan on the planet of Mirial in 39 BBY. Before she was born her parents' village was raided by pirates and they were left with nothing after their home had been destroyed amidst the chaos. Betharda's parents were offered a deal where they would have to do one odd job in exchange for the chance to be smuggled off the planet by some mercenaries working for The Trade Federation. All they wanted was protection against the pirates. Betharda's parents went through with the odd job they were given which in turn eventually allowed for them to be smuggled to Coruscant where they could seek refuge and start over. Betharda who they nicknamed "Bet" was born shortly after they settled on Coruscant. Bet's parents then made a promise to pay back whatever credits they owed to The Trade Federation. It wasn't long before the Alias' were hunted down and taken prisoner at the hands of The Trade Federation when they hadn't coughed up the credits they owed. As Bet's parents were killed, she was sold to be a slave for the very same pirates that raided her home village on Mirial. Bet was a slave for nearly 7 years before she would be rescued by none other than Jedi Master Mace Windu. Master Mace Windu could sense how powerful the young Mirialan was in the ways of the force. Although her future remained cloudy, he knew she would make a great asset to the Jedi. He decided to take her back to Coruscant with him to train at the Jedi Temple. She was brought forth to the great Jedi council where she was later sent to be trained under the guidance of grand Master Yoda.

She was a student in the Jedi Temple for nearly 3 years before she was promoted to the title of padawan. Everyone knew it was a Mirialan tradition for Mirialan jedi masters to take on other Mirialans as their padawans but, there were no available Mirialan jedi masters, so it was quite a while before the Jedi council could find her a master. Months had passed before the council had found the perfect master for Bet, a young female Twi'lek named Lo Motta. Because of Bet's childhood she was never aware of the Mirialan jedi traditions and didn't seem to care if she wasn't given another Mirialan to be her teacher. But, Lo Motta was well aware of the Mirialan jedi traditions, so she found it quite peculiar that the jedi council offered Bet to be her padawan. At first Lo Motta was hesitant and tried everything she could to help find another Mirialan jedi master for Bet. But to no avail, she decided to accept Bet as her padawan and the two got along famously from the start.


Bet was Master Lo Motta's padawan learner from the age of 10 to the age of 17. She would go on countless missions with Master Lo Motta all across the galaxy. There were plenty of times where Master Lo Motta or Bet would be nearly killed, captured or imprisoned by enemy forces and one would have to rescue the other. A short time before Order 66 had been enacted Master Lo Motta and bet were sent on a private mission, by the Chancellor to arrest separatist criminal Admiral Zanja, an assistant to Captain Trench. Although the mission was for both Bet and Master Lo Motta, Master Lo Motta had given Bet her own side mission to do herself while she took her clone squadron, The 408th Legion, with her to help assist in the arrest of Admiral Zanja. Bet’s mission was to travel to the planet of Mandalore and pick up some supplies for their next mission. Bet argued with Master Lo Motta and begged and pleaded to be taken with her but Master Lo Motta was not caving in to Bet’s demands. Although Bet desperately wanted to go alongside Master Lo Motta, she agreed to the mission she was given and took a ship to Mandalore alone.

It was at this time that Chancellor Palpatine had enacted Order 66 but the story doesn’t end there.

 

Darth Grem; sith lord (kaleesh male)
Homeworld: kalee
Abilities: force choke, saber spin, force lightning
Weapons: four red lightsabers
Appearance: has a strong resemblance to General Grievous but with red armor
(also cyborg)

 

Aramis: Former Jedi Sentinel (Temple Guard) now bounty hunter, (Chiss Female), 16 during order 66
Homeworld: Csilla
Abilities: force punish (light side lightning), force crush, force push, mind trick, force pill
Weapons: A double bladed gold light saber and a DC15A Blaster Carbine
Appearance: wears Temple Guard Robes with articles of Coruscant guard armor on top , black hair

Background: Joined the temple guard a few days before operation nightfall, dueled the future grand inquisitor and escaped only to nearly be killed by Anakin, a Jedi she looked up to. When she regained consciousness she was outside of the temple surrounded by Coruscant Guard, she killed them and escaped the planet. Since then she has worked as a mercenary, though she spends much of her time either outright attacking imperial interests or helping rebels and Jedi survivors.

 

Dunjo Edwar; Grey Jedi (Dathomirian Zabrak Male)
Homeworld: Dathomir
Abilities: Force choke, force push, force pull, mindtrick, saber throw.
Weapons: Single bladed white lightsaber and single bladed yellow lightsaber
Appearance: Very rare pale white dathomirian zabrak, dark brown robe, no hair, one orange eye, one pale blue eye, medium sized zabrak horns.

Story: Dunjo Edwar was born on Dathomir to an un-named nightsister and nightbrother. Since he was a white Zabrak, (Barely any ever existed) he was set up to be given nightsister training, since a rarer colour of skin in a male dathomirian zabrak signifies strength in the force (like darth maul being red). Not wanting this for her child, his un-named mother sent out a call for help, which was picked up by the jedi, who came to dathomir in secret, and took the child, sensing his strong force powers. Dunjo would undergo the usual youngling training, until he was picked up by master Kit Fisto as an apprentice. He became a knight at the early age of 17, however it would be within his 17th year when his life would change. Dunjo had a unique ability to be able to sense things that would happen much before they did and he sensed his master being killed by Chancellor Palpatine, AKA Darth Sidious. He alerted the jedi council of his suspicions, but since they couldn't sense Palpatine's strong presence in the dark side (and Dunjo wasn't anyone important like Anakin), concluded that Edwar's suspicion's were false. Finally understanding the arrogance of the order, Dunjo left, not before bidding his old master farewell. Dunjo Edwar would end up becoming completely balanced in the force, not allowing either side to dominate his style of fighting or meditation (he was a grey jedi). Then came the great jedi purge, where Edwar sensed the death of his master and the dramatic shift in the force, as he had predicted. Over the years he was hunted down by many Inquisitors, one of these being his younger brother who he never knew he had. His brother would die similarly to The second sister in jedi fallen order, killed by Darth Vader for failing him, causing Dunjo to run from Vader, knowing he was far outmatched by the sith lord. However before he fled he had taken his brother's lightsaber, purifying it as Ashoka had done, and turning it white. When the empire fell, he would join Luke Skywalker in forming a new jedi order. Whilst he was not a jedi, he believed that under the tutelage of him and the chosen one, the jedi could truly bring balance to the force. When he was in his 70s, Ben Solo would fall to the dark side and kill all of the jedi younglings whilst Dunjo was sleeping. He was able to wake up just as Ben attacked him and even as an old man was able to defeat Ben, but chose not to kill him, believing he could be turned. Dunjo would then flee to his home planet of dathomir, where he would allow him self to die peacefully, at one with the force.


Oh yeah, and if you're still making that book adding my character would be alright, I don't really care if you edit his storyline or completly change it

 

A long time ago in a galaxy far far away...

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It's been centuries since the Jedi stands. The teachings of the force are long forgotten. After countless times of wars, revolutions, and peace, the intelligent beings of the galaxy began to advance further technologically, and spiritually. That is, except a civilization living on planet X3N4r10, which was not as technologically advanced as the other planets in the galaxy. the people used to say that the planet used to be called with a different name, although now forgotten.

the story began with three curious boys who explored the uncivilized forests of the planet. they used to explore nature and hunt in their younger days, but this time, it's different. they decided to explore the uncharted part of the planet where most people avoid due to an ancient legend telling people to stay away from these areas as an old saying said that a restless spirit haunts the area and any person entering the forest will never find their way back. It doesn'tstop these kids though...

Evan was the bravest among them, he was tall, confident, and charismatic. but at times, reckless and tactless. Matthew on the other hand was a smart guy. he can quickly map out areas and analyze objects, making efficient use of them. but he can be a little weird at times, sometimes talking about weird dreams, and at one point, stating that he had foreseen an event that happened before in his dream. Jason, the last of the three, was the most empathetic. he puts others' needs before his own. has a great understanding of how emotion works. but at times, he seemed to be distant in his thoughts.

as the three explored deeper into the forest, they found a ruin, among the huge trees. Matthew suspected that the construction must be huge, and told the group that it is possible that the rest of the ruins can be found underground. After a little debate, the group decided to dig the site. with shovels which they had brought with them. not long after, they found a secret passage below. the group then decided to walk into the ruins below, but when they set their foot into the place, they felt a chilling ominous aura coming from further in.

Matthew and Jason were at first intimidated, but Evan convinced them to keep going. They reluctantly agreed and moved on. the ruins were very dark, so the group built a wooden torch and ventured down. they saw unknown words engraved on the walls, there were images as well, suggesting an act of ritual. they then found a clear silver crystal on an altar deep inside the ruins. it was illuminating the room around it. as the group walked closer towards the crystal, they could feel a presence watching them. They were terrified, but Evan shouted, telling the entity to show himself, and said that he wasn't afraid of it. then they heard a mysterious voice, telling them to avoid the crystal. But Evan was reckless, he neglected the warning and ran towards the crystal before his friends had a chance to hold him back. he touched the mysterious crystal and suddenly the color changed into a dark blue. He was excited at this phenomenon before a supernatural force blew him backward, making him fall on his butt. his friends quickly rush to aid him, but the brave kid managed to quickly get up and rushed towards the mysterious crystal, quickly grabbing the thing out of the altar, he felt a magnetic force repelling him, but he managed to resist it anyway. the mysterious voice then told them to get out of there and run. the voice echoes and not before long, the ground trembles. the whole ruins seemed to fall apart. far ahead the group saw a statue slowly cracking and from it emerged a dark cloaked figure. the figure extended their arm to their side and 3 long red laser-like claws extended from their hands. the group began to run away from the impending threat, but the figure suddenly appeared in front of them with natural speed. Evan began to confront the threat before Jason pulled him back and shook his head. the threat began to move slowly towards them before Matthew walks casually towards the being and began a bargain. He told the being he would do anything for it as long as they let his friends live. Unimpressed with the deal, the figure raised its long red laser claws before Matthew magically pushed the figure with some kind of unseen force. he then shouted, telling his friends to run. they seemed reluctant at first but quickly escape the ruins without a chance of looking back. they went outside the ruins, but without Matthew on their side, they were lost in the seemingly endless jungle.

The duo traveled for days. haunted by despair and regrets. Jason's mind was in terrible shape and he almost gave up hope before even convinced him to move on with life. But Evan was more troubled, his remorse was so great that it almost wiped out the confidence in his eyes. He knew that he was the cause of this disaster and what made him feel worse was the fact that Jason did not even blame him despite the actions that he had done. the duo kept walking until they found a village. Not just some random village, but their village, burned and razed to the ground. Both of their eyes widened in shock, Evan just realized that he had unleashed a great evil upon the world. a middle-aged woman then saw them and approached them, she called their names and asked them where have they been in such a worried voice. The boys remained silent until Evan spoke up. He told the lady that it was all his fault. He said that he have unleashed great evil on the world. he then showed the crystal he stole to the middle-aged lady before tears overwhelmed him. Jason on the other hand, looked so terrible as if his life was sucked out of him.

upon hearing the story, the middle-aged lady told the kid that she had just returned from outside of the village and saw the village destroyed. she then lead the young boys into a hidden bunker within a remnant of the lady's house. there the boys saw a huge spaceship. The lady identified herself as N'epy, and she said that she was originally from a planet called Cato Neimoidia. She told them that it is no longer safe here and suggested the boys follow her towards her home planet.

3 earth years have passed (hey now, you know years can be different depending on the planet you live so I will be using the earthen years for this) and the boys were now fifteen. They live with N’epy and her brother who lived on the bridge city of the planet. N’epy’s brother L’ioky was a scholar who researched ancient civilization and was studying the lost art of swordsmanship. He was surprised when Evan showed him the mysterious crystal that he had found and quickly identified it as a type of Kyber crystal, and a unique one that is. He said that Kyber crystal rarely changes color, but in this case, it changed color depending on the person who touches it. The crystal changed to blue when Evan touched it, but became purple when Jason touched it. Whereas when N’epy or L’ioki touched it, there was no change. L’ioki suspected that the crystal required a certain person for it to react, and he remembered that centuries ago, there were warriors who used Kyber crystal as weapons and were skilled with the art of the sword. They were called the Jedi and they were protectors of the galaxy. He knew no further than this as all of their records have been lost for centuries and now they were nothing but a mere legend. Despite this, L’ioky decided to train Evan and Jason in the swordsmanship that he had been researching for the past decades. The boys trained their swordsmanship tutored by L’ioky in the morning, helped N’epy with gardening in the afternoon. In the evening Evan trained more in swordsmanship while Jacob went to L’ioky’s library to learn more about the ancient art of the Jedi. Evan grew into a confident young man who was popular in the bars while Jason became a kind-hearted young man who would help anyone in need. Their bond grew stronger and would address each other as brothers.

One day, Evan and Jason are sparring together. They both were wielding swords, crafted from wood. Evan stepped forward and proceed to attack with a downward slash but Jason quickly moved sideways and countered Evan’s attack with a horizontal upward slash. Evan then kept attacking relentlessly only for Jason to parry every attack and with a low sweep broke Evan’s balance then thrust his sword forward dropping Evan to the ground. Evan tried to stand but Jason pointed his sword at Evan saying that the fight is over. Jason told Evan that he need to stay calm and not recklessly attack to fight better. Evan just dismissed the idea, saying that Jason was just too talented despite him training harder than Jason in the art of the sword. When they came home, L’ioky gave them each a portion of the Kyber crystal they found. He said that he managed to split the Kyber crystal into two so that Evan and Jason can both make full use of them. He then told them about the lightsaber. A sword of light which the Jedi used to protect the galaxy. He then told them that these Jedi often meditate but he is unsure of how they do it.

Not long after, a huge spacecraft appeared to be hovering about the city until it landed on a nearby forest among the huge rocks of the planet. Five hooded figures began to emerge from the spacecraft. One of them wore an intimidating dark mask and he said that he could sense the crystal nearby. The other four were wielding dark staffs and suddenly a long red blade began to form at the edge of their staff. They ravaged the bridge city in search of the crystal. Knowing this, L’ioky told the boys to escape the planet but they refused, insisting on fighting against the enemy and defending their home. Having expected their answer, he quickly took a short stick and struck the boys quickly on the back of their necks before they could make any move. He told N’epy that they were better separated to make sure these evil figures would not easily find them. He sent Jason with N’epy on the larger spaceship and took Evan on another spaceship with his robot and ordered him to go to coruscant. He then took his sword and some remaining fragments of the Kyber crystal, joining with the people defending their homeland. Guns were shot and deflected, the people screamed as the blades maim anyone it hits. L’ioky then came face to face with the dark masked figure. Three red claw-like blades emerged from the figure’s hands, he attacked L’ioky with a barrage of vicious carnage with his long saber claws, only for L’ioky to evade them all. The fight kept going until L’ioky was cornered. The figure shouted in rage, telling L’ioky that he was a sith called Darth Belial and how he was destined to be the ruler of the galaxy if he was not sealed by his apprentice on a lousy planet. Darth Belial then went berserk, attacking with pure carnage. This time L’ioky tried to evade and counter his attacks, but they were too fast and his sword stand no chance against the red saberclaw, shredding it into pieces as he tried to parry the dark lord’s attacks. He looked towards the dark lord one last time before getting stabbed through the chest by the dark lord himself. Darth Belial then undid his saber claws, dropping the old mean dead to the ground. He then took the fragments of the crystal and felt a surge of energy running into his body. He then laughed maniacally as he regained some of his sealed powers within the remnants of the crystal. He then proceed to bring destruction upon the planet and vowed to regain all his former powers from the crystal that sealed him away.


Part 1 ancient darkness -end-

(to be continued)


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Name-*UNKNOWN*

Codename-X

Bounty Hunter/ Male Human

Homeworld-Coruscant

Abilities-Very talented with pistols and knows several forms of martial arts also very good with tech

Weapons-Akimbo Westar-34 (Jango Fett pistols), and a heavy repeater that is magnetically attached to his back.

Appearance-Wears a regular bodysuit with leather-topped steel protective armor pads as his armor. He wears a bulletproof full-head helmet with a built-in hud, scanner, facial recognition software, scope, and constant coms with his R8 droid.

Tech/Gear-He uses lots of tech and gear on his missions. He has a belt that can hold and dispense 3 detonators, he has rockets on his boots similar to Cad-Bane, he uses his previously mentioned helmet to track and locate bounties, he carries a bacta sprayer at all times on his lower right chest for quick access, and last but most important his modified X-Wing nicknamed the X-8000 the 8000 has many features. The features of the 8000 include a built-in hud on the glass for easy targeting, many scanners to locate targets through walls, a very powerful engine that can start automatically, his R8 droid has complete control over the whole ship, it has loads of cameras, a reinforced hull, and an enhanced weapon system including one seismic charge.

He was born in the underground of Coruscant. His parents were killed in a robbery when he was only 8 years old leaving him to fend for himself on the street. After surviving on dumpster diving for 6 years he got fed up and took a new profession. Only 14 at the time he would start getting hired by locals to fend off kids who keep stealing food from vendors. While on one of his jobs he was badly hurt by higher-up thugs. He was luckily found by a local bounty hunter. The bounty hunter knew about him and was shocked about how well he could fight. You see the people who beat him up were the people this bounty hunter had been sent to kill. From there he became an apprentice of the bounty hunter who went by X. While an apprentice he learned martial arts and got good with pistols. But sadly when hired to help the separatists near the end of the clone war he had to face a moral choice. Help his master and the man who saved him or rat him out to the republic. Instead, he chose neither and ran away. His master was killed on that mission. He returned to his old base and took everything he could. He used these supplies to become a bounty hunter of his own he resurrected the name of his master he would now be known as....X. Over the course of the next 8 years, he became a fierce bounty hunter with a large name for himself. He was quite rich and had a penthouse on coruscant that doubled as his base of operations. He doesn't do jobs for the Empire or the Rebellion. But he has had run-ins with the empire several times one time even going up against purge troopers.


(P.S if you like this character feel free to draw them and submit your drawing I would love to see him brought to life by this amazing community)

 

Möbius Sneg

Class: None.
Species: Unknown genetically-engineered gender-ambiguous reptilian species.
Homeworld: Tatooine
Abilities: Can infinitely grow new skin shaped like fashionable clothing outfit/disguise, and rip the old skin off repeatedly, like peeling an onion.
Weapons: Charm, seduction and venom.
Appearance: Lizard/snakelike, with attractive human features. When roused, cobra-like hood snaps open for attack mode.
Occupation: Cantina exotic dancing entertainer, honey-trapper spy, and aspiring fashion designer. Collects weapons from dead targets, and blackmarkets them to Cantina's scum and villainy.