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My ultimate ESBesque ending to VIII

Discussion in 'Star Wars: The Last Jedi' started by Rasec, Dec 23, 2015.

  1. Rasec

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    I wish i could b a writer on this script.

    Ok. If they are mirroring the feeling of the originals which it seems as what they r going for 8 will b empire dark.

    Imagine this ending:

    We r on the island (dont kill me for not knowing the name atm) where we find Luke. Snoke and Kylo have made their way there. Leia had already arrived to join her brother and convince him that they direly need his help. Rey is there training with what we all asume is her father. Luke senses Snoke and is off to battle and tells Rey to stay with Leia. Tells her shes not ready. While Luke is off in an epic battle with Kylo and Snoke, Kylo notices the pure hatred of Snoke and breaks away Already having questioned his search for power in the dark side.

    Kylo reaches Leia and drops to his knees crying say, "please forgive me". Leia tears up. She slowly put her hand on her sons head as an acceptance of forgiveness. Rey, having already drawn her saber assuming Kylo was there to attack, grow furious. She attacks Kylo as Kylo backs up defending with his saber every angry attack Rey strikes at him.

    Rey screams with every strong hatefull strike that pushes Kylo back " u killed the padawans," (slash) "u killed ur father!" (Slash) "uve slaughtered villages!" (Slash) "and u think u can just beg forgiveness?!"

    All the while Leia is begging Rey to stop.

    Kylo is telling Rey he is done with evil.

    Finally Kylo drops his saber saying, "strike me down if u think i dont speak the truth."

    Rey pauses but then gets an evil look on her face and winds up to slash him dead.

    Leia yells "stopppp!" Draws her blaster and shoots at Rey.

    Rey in her anger acts out of pure instinct and turns with a bat swing and returns the shot through Leias chest.

    Now having turned back to Ben, runs to his mother and u have that every cinematic death goodbye moment.

    Luke abandons his duel with Snoke to run to his sister.

    Rey is frozen in shock having noticed what she has done. Luke arrives and Rey runs arms swinging hard going as fast as she can as far as she can until shes out of breath. She drops to her knees holding her hands in her face. She then looks up and yells so vigoursly in anger that the earth shakes around her. When her yells ends. Snoke appears behind her, waves his hand over her head and Rey drops unconscious to the floor. "U r ready," Snoke says. He picks her up and walks off unto the ship he arrived on.

    Back to Luke and Ben watching the ship fly away. Luke utters, "all that i have feared has come to pass."

    End of movie.

    Now think about this. Rey has a power beyond Kylo's without an iota of training. Rey attacks Kylo in TFA instead of defending herself.

    And it would explain y Luke left her far away in Jokuu in the outter rims. And it also explains Luke's perplexed emotion on his face at the end of TFA bcuz he has sensed the Vader in her.

    As hesitant as Yoda was to train Luke but did neway, Luke trains his daughter even in hesitance. Once again, Luke has failed. Now he and Ben must face down Rey and Snoke in 9.
    --- Double Post Merged, Dec 23, 2015, Original Post Date: Dec 23, 2015 ---
    Ps sorry for the grammar. Im posting from an ipad and my fat fingers skips letters due to my rushing.
     
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  2. Suspicious Moon

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    Wow, I like this actually. I don't think it turns out this way, but this is some great fanfiction :)
     
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    Tks. No i definitely dont think it turns out this way. If a nobody like me has thought of it no chance the experts will go that way.

    Neway to me the ying and yang of Ben and Rey switching positions is great ncuz at this moment we LOVE Rey so much and HATE Kylo so much. What an unexpected hit on our emotions.
     
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    Hell yes.
     
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    Yeah... props for thinking that one up, but I could do with a little less screaming, crying and yelling.
     
  6. Rasec

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    Lol i can agree with that. Very much so. I most certainly want to stay away from the whiney Haydensen. Good lord he was bad. That guy could b the nicest dude in real life and i will forever hate him.
     
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