Old Legends Ancient Sith Novel (Unfinished)

So about 5 or 6 years ago I started working on a novel before I understood the actual process that got Star Wars writers hired - I assumed that if I wrote a quality piece of work that followed all canon content at the time and told an interesting, non-conflicting story, I might have a chance of getting it published with Lucas Books (boy was I wrong!) Anyway, before I learned the truth of the writing industry, I cobbled together a 30,000 word treatment telling the story of the rise and fall of the Golden age of the Sith from Ludo Kressh and Naga Sadow's perspectives.

Since this is all Legends now and I doubt I'll ever return to it, I figure there's no harm in sharing what I came up with. I will say I've certainly grown as a writer in the last 4 or 5 years since I've touched this, but I feel like there's a few decent moments here and there that may make it perhaps enjoyable to read casually. Let me know if you enjoy my take on the Star Wars universe and the ancient Sith - you'll have to forgive a few bits of the narrative as it was eventually overwritten by newer Legends content (such that Ludo Kressh's personality isn't as level-headed or egalitarian as this treatment portrays it seems).

Please enjoy the Sith Pact, chapters 1-5.

(Note: it's a bit raw so there's no shortage of grammatical errors or misplaced words)