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Revenge of the Sith - Modern teaser trailer

Discussion in 'Fan Film' started by Bazookaleffe, Aug 4, 2015.

  1. Bazookaleffe

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    Hi.

    I just wanted to share my fan-cut teaser trailer for Revenge of the Sith and hear some feedback.
    A lot of trailers (both teasers and cinematics) these days spoil too much (The Force Awakens is an exception) so I tried to keep it as much of as tease as possible without revealing the plot.

    All feedback is welcomed since I'm planning on making a teaser trailer for each Star Wars movie.
    Hope you'll enjoy:
     
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    I did great trailer.
     
  3. AlienofDoom

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    Since you're looking for feedback I'd be happy to oblige!
    First off, I really like the beginning where you stick with Yoda and intercut him with other scenes, his voiceover works great with the material you've chosen. As well I think that your ending shot is a very good choice as the grieving Anakin is essentially what RotS is all about. The center is where I think it's not quite as strong, we have neither a strong thematic tie between the scenes or a voiceover to be linking them together, so (at least to me) it seems much more like just like random scenes (which I suppose may be unavoidable in a teaser trailer of this sort) but it's just a bit too long I think for that to work.

    Overall though, I think it was very well done, and I'd definitely be interested in seeing more of your work!
     
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    "Revenge of the Sith" was one of my favorite. Well done teaser, did not give too much away.
     
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