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StarWars:The Red Legion (Includes a small teaser)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Darth Revan8, Feb 5, 2015.

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Will Star Wars: The Red Legion be good?

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  1. Darth Revan8

    Darth Revan8 Rebelscum

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    Hello cantina. For those of you who do not already know I am in the process of making a Star Wars book called Star Wars: The Red Legion. This will be the thread where I will post weekly updates to the book. Right now I am posting a small teaser for you so you can get all hyped for when I post the first section of the book in a few day if not later today. here it is. Special thanks to @Voxx for the awesome poster!!

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    Teaser: Date: 2/5/15
    It's been thirty years. With the Emperor killed along with Darth Vader, the Empire began to crumble. Five years after the battle of Endor, a Sith Lord made himself know to the galaxy. No one was aware of where he came from. The Sith started a new empire of his own. The Red Legion. Anyone still remaining in the old Empire join The Red Legion, but some not willing to join his dark cause joined the rebellion....

    Chapter 1 Part 1 Update 1: Date: 2/5/15
    The hall was dark. A deep voice calls. "Join us....or die." Chasin looks around a corner and he finds the source of the voice.
    A tall thin man draped in a black robe. His face concealed. The man holds a small cylindrical device in his right hand.
    Chasin steps back. Sweat pours down his face. His heart is racing, faster and faster. The man steps toward him. The cylindrical device he holds is ignited and a single red blade emerges from its tip. Chasin reaches for his right hip. He grabs his own cylindrical device. A lightsaber. He ignites it. A single blue blade emerges. He takes a step forward.
    The masked man jumps toward Chasin. The two lightsabers clash. Chasin pulls back and swings for the mans head, but to no avail. The man dodges the attack.
    "You don't scare me, Sith!" Chasin says to his masked opponent. The Sith does not reply but only swings at Chasin's head with his lightsaber. The lightsabers clash on and on until one of the Sith's attacks connect. Chasin is pierced by the serging red blade of his opponent right in his chest. Everything starts to become hard to see, until he see nothing. Only darkness but, a voice calls. "Chasin? Chasin wake up!"

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    Chapter 1 Part 2 Update 2: Date: TBD

    Coming soon...
     
    #1 Darth Revan8, Feb 5, 2015
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  2. Darth Lexor Kai

    Darth Lexor Kai General of the Future Folk

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    looks pretty cool. looking forward to seeing how this will develop
     
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  3. Darth Revan8

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    Update1: First part of book-(chapter 1) Date: 2/5/15



    The hall was dark. A deep voice calls. "Join us....or die." Chasin looks around a corner and he finds the source of the voice.

    A tall thin man draped in a black robe. His face concealed. The man holds a small cylindrical device in his right hand.
    Chasin steps back. Sweat pours down his face. His heart is racing, faster and faster. The man steps toward him. The cylindrical device he holds is ignited and a single red blade emerges from its tip. Chasin reaches for his right hip. He grabs his own cylindrical device. A lightsaber. He ignites it. A single blue blade emerges. He takes a step forward.
    The masked man jumps toward Chasin. The two lightsabers clash. Chasin pulls back and swings for the mans head, but to no avail. The man dodges the attack.
    "You don't scare me, Sith!" Chasin says to his masked opponent. The Sith does not reply but only swings at Chasin's head with his lightsaber. The lightsabers clash on and on until one of the Sith's attacks connect. Chasin is pierced by the serging red blade of his opponent right in his chest. Everything starts to become hard to see, until he see nothing. Only darkness but, a voice calls. "Chasin? Chasin wake up!"

    Here is the first part of the story hope you enjoy!!


     
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    The Red legion will be good at what it does.
     
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    This is a great read very well done and hope to see more soon
     
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