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GAME TFA Opening Crawl

Discussion in 'Gaming And Competitions' started by Wayne, Feb 3, 2015.

  1. Wayne

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    I couldn't find an existing thread that does this so apologies if there is one.

    With all the rumours, speculation and leaks we now have more than enough ideas flying around to compose an opening crawl, just for fun. Based on the ideas you've heard that you like, what would yours be?

    Here's one from me:

    STAR WARS
    Episode VII: THE FORCE AWAKENS
    It has been 30 years since the death of Emperor Palpatine. An
    uneasy peace has befallen the galaxy.

    Systems loyal to the fractured EMPIRE now struggle to maintain
    independence
    as a NEW REPUBLIC gains mounting influence
    among its dissenters. Where no clear loyalty is in evidence,
    chaos and crime reign supreme.


    In a noble attempt to once again unite the galaxy, Chancellor Solo
    has volunteered to act as envoy to the OUTER RIM in the hope of
    negotiating a truce with the powerful HUTT CLANS....

    ....
     
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  2. loppie245

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    I love it!
     
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    I agree, I will post my later.
     
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    Along time ago in a galaxy far,far away.

    STAR WARS EPISODE VII
    THE FORCE AWAKENS.

    30 YEARS AFTER THE BATTLE OF ENDOR RESULTING IN
    THE DEATHS OF DARTH VADER & THE GALATIC EMPEROR PALPATINE,THE GALACTIC CIVIL WAR
    CONTINUES BETWEEN THE REBEL ALLIANCE & THE GALACTIC EMPIRE
    WITH THE WAR FOUGHT TO A STALEMATE, WARLORDS OF THE IMPERIAL REMNANT ATTEMPT TO TURN THE TIDE AGAINST THE NEW REPUBLIC, WITH THE HUTTS REMAINING NEUTRAL DURING THE WAR ,GRAND MASTER OF THE JEDI & DECORATED WAR HERO LUKE SKYWALKER SENDS HIS SISTER LEIA ORGANA SOLO TO NAL HUTTA THE HUTT HOMEWORLD IN A ATTEMPT GAIN SUPPORT,THE IMPERIALS HAVE PLACED A ASSASSIN ON THE PLANET TO KILL THE CHIEF OF STATE BEFORE SHE CAN NEGOTIATE WITH THE HUTTS, WILL THE REBELS SEE THROUGH THE TRAP.....
     
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  5. Paul Resendes

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    Good stuff, but I doubt that Leia will change her last name to Solo. I can see it remaining Organa
     
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    Here is mine!

    STAR WARS EPISODE VII
    THE FORCE AWAKENS


    The death of the Emperor brought
    30 years of relative peace to the galaxy.
    Recently, rogue remnants of the
    GALACTIC EMPIRE took control of several
    star systems with hopes to reclaim
    their vast dominion.

    Meanwhile, elite squads of of Imperial
    stormtroopers search for lost relics of the
    SITH LORDS, convinced they will discover
    the secrets to unimaginable power
    and gain the ability to control
    countless worlds.

    To stop this rising threat,
    Chancellor Leia Organa Solo orders
    ALLIANCE forces to pursue an Imperial
    ship in route to the remote planet
    of JAKKU.

    Edit: Updated TATOOINE to JAKKU
     
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  7. John Crichton

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    Very good stuff indeed, though like @Paul Resendes said, it'd be weird for the name to be written like that. I think in the EU it was always "Organa Solo" or similar. I'll admit that at first I had a :eek: moment because my mind instantly went to "Chancellor Han Solo" instead of Leia. :p

    Other than the name thing (probably would be "Chancellor Leia Organa ± Solo" for clarity), it could very easily be exactly what we see. Nice crawl.
     
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    Maybe your right, for royal reasons it was her foster birth name.

    Well Han did still keep up the smuggler role I doubt a role chancellor would have been his choice of a career change, maybe @Paul Resendes might put in a request for a username change not that there is anything wrong with his current one.
     
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    http://www.starwars.com/games-apps/star-wars-crawl-creator/?54e4f71de4b02ca08e4e53e9

    There's a fun site where you can create your own crawl. Pretty cool.

    Here's mine

    Episode VII
    The Force Awakens
    There is continued unrest in the galaxy. Planetary systems
    are tasked with picking sides in an ever-going galactic civil
    war between the Empire and the New Republic with an end
    nowhere in sight.

    The New Republic, under the new leadership of LEIA
    ORGANA
    , a veteran of the rebellion, is tasked with ending
    this generational war once and for all.


    At the Republic's time of need, hope dwindles as Imperial
    Star Destroyers close in on TATOOINE, a system they believe
    contains a vital artifact to the ending of the war...
     
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    Or she could change it to her birth name.......
     
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    The Force Awakens

    30 years have passed since the Battle of Endor,
    Our hero's are spread far and wide,
    Following an ongoing struggle for power with newly formed First Order.
    Supreme Leader and Evil prophet Kaddan Snoke has despatched his padawan Kylo Ren
    In order to find Jedi relics and fallen Master Luke Skywalker,
    in order to resurrect the power of the dark side
    .
    .
    .
    .​
     
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    moving this one to a thread in the game lounge. :D
     
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    I need to look further afield than the TFA forum obviously. sorry
     
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    no worries man it happens. We have a ton of forums here. gaming/gambling, comics, fan made, and even some non-star wars stuff. take some time to look around you might find some other stuff you like.
     
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    It is a time of relative peace throughout the galaxy.
    30 years have passed since the destruction of
    the second DEATH STAR. The Empire is all

    but destroyed.

    Queen Leia Organa, new leader of the RESISTANCE,
    has discovered the location of a long-forgotten
    weapon. She has sent pilot POE DAMERON

    on a mission to the remote planet
    of Jakku.


    They are not alone. In a final act of desperation,
    the FIRST ORDER will not allow this threat
    to go unnoticed, and will see that order is
    restored to the galaxy....
     
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