Would this improve The Last Jedi? (A welcome to both "lovers" and "haters"

So, hubris aside, and respectful of the one's who found TLJ flawless, would some of these changes make it more palatable for the ones who aren't at the 10/10 already? Yes, I know this is pure SW fan fiction, and perhaps somewhat predictable, but would this be so bad? Bear in mind, it is just an outline.

From start to finish:

1. Get rid of the Poe/Hux call, or make it shorter/cut the humour. Continue to build Hux as a downright scary fascist on the level with Tarkin.

2. No slow WW2 bombers in defiance of physics in space. Bring in in a-wings or new e-wings instead of the most useless space bombers contrived by man.

3. Don't go with the "techno-babble" to get a deuce ex machina explanation for the space chase. Let there be a spy, transmitting the co-ordinates to the Empire after each jump. Create real and plausible tension and paranoia aboard the rebel fleet when they realize this instead of "not telling anyone the plan". Finn will be a suspect/arrested with planted evidence leading to him.

4. Flat out remove Rose Tico.

5. Let Finn have a new arc to show himself a hero. Don't go with the "I'm a coward that will run away and look after myself" theme again. It was done in TFA, we need to see him evolve past that, as he already did. Let Phasma be his antagonist, don't waste her again.

6. Luke does not toss away his father's old lightsaber. Let him feel the significance of it...even hear it call out like it did to Rey....before handing it back to Rey. "I expect you will be needing this more than I will" or some such. No mention of a "laser sword".

7. Show us Luke mourning Han....instead of literally crossing the river to get water (or fish, in this instance), or drinking blue alien milk. Add in some actual lessons to Rey, and alter the timeline somewhat to accomodate this.

8. Remove the whole Canto Bight plotline.

9. Let Leia show us some cool force abilities...just don't do it with the stupid "superman scene" where she survives in cold space and opens a door that would depressurize the whole ship. Let her try to locate the spy through the force....and thwart a later assination because of that effort in an attempt through force abilities....though barely surviving and ending in a coma. Holdo takes over, Poe is sceptical, but she shows competance and leadership, showing Poe what he needs to strive to become.

10. Give Acbar a nice send-off as a diversion to let the rebels escape. Let him go in a blaze og glory, perhaps even ramming the first order using sub-light thrusters (Though no internal logic breaking super hyperspace weapon that makes every other space battles moot)

11. Let the rebels hit the base sooner instead of an illogical space chase at same speed levels. The spy transmits their co-ordinates, before being found out. When the First order arrives, make it into a desperate to and fro battle similar to Rogue One's. (shield generator... )Let the scenery be different. Don't go with "salt" instead of "snow", and another "gotcha" moment. Come up with something imaginitive. And, let Finn shine here after being released and cleared. He would be well placed to counter the Imperials knowing their tactics in battle. Pair him up with Poe, give that bromance a chance. They face Hux and Phasma in command of enemy ground troops.

12. Back on treasure Island: Luke explains the reason why he cut himself off from the force. He feels the loss of his students deeply. We see some flashbacks from the temple burning/slaughter, where Luke ultimately failed in preventing it. The Knights of Ren play a part here together with Kylo's betrayal/first order crack troops.

And he, did have a love interest you see...her name was Mara. Even though they loved each other, the relationship was very complicated, after an intense fall-out he had not seen her for years. He later discovered she died through the actions of the first order, trying to find him through his known associates. Forget the "stroking his lightsaber next to a sleeping 15 year old" explanation.

Ever since then...he has felt anger...and hate. It calls to him...it too is in his family's legacy. He wants revenge, and he knows it would likely bring him to the dark side if he were to confront Snoke and Kylo directly. He sought out the jedi temple to try to find a new balance...but has not succeeded. The dark hole on the island beckons to him still. There's a black cabinet in his quarters, beckoning.

14. An awakened Leia attends a holographic meeting with the powers that be in the New Republic, instead of Maz Kanata's comic labour war call. In the meeting some see the rebels as warmongers partly responsible for the destruction caused by Starkiller base. Some are afraid if the first order. Yet others have sympathies for them. We will see Leia make an impassionate attempt to send their forces to confront the first order. The response affords no conclusion.

15. After the facetiming etc. Luke is still sceptical. Rey goes to see Kylo Ren...Luke distraught. He later touches some of Rey's belongings when he is alone. And a vision hits him. He sees Rey's past, her feelings. And he sees the face of her mother leaving her on Jakku...to hide in safety while she tried to avoid her hunters. The forewhadowed cabinet springs open. We zoom out as we see cracks appearing in the ground around his hut.

16. Throne room...things go similar to TLJ. Yet, Snoke reveals a little more of his origins. Basically, he is just a power hungry dark force user not aligned with the Sith. Shying the scene while Sidious and Vader was around..the rule of two explaining this...rising when they were gone. And no...he does not get cheapshotted by Kylo, yet the attempt is made and thwarted.

17. An urgent message reaches the throne room. "Enemy x-wing approaching" "somehow the fire teams do fail to fire". We get to see Luke fly on in, similar to Anakin in episode 3 above Coruscant, blasting through a hangar bay with his iconic ship. Snoke orders his men to secure the throne room. We get to see a Jedi master in action, Luke's full potential, eventually breaking past them to the Throne room despite their best efforts. Forget about Vader in R1...this would be awesome, and brutal. He wields a red lightsaber, locked away on his cabinet... That too, belonged to his father. His face is contorted with anger and hate. A quick scene with Leia, feeling that something terrible is happening with Luke.

18. Luke enters. Rey/Kylo subdued. Snoke is still confident/boastful. He gives a little speech about everything going as planned, with Luke now in the open. Snoke is sure Luke is no match for Snoke and the dark side...especially with his Praetorian guard closing in. They have been training for years to take down Luke. Luke is struck by force ligtning...some of the guard are within striking distance. Suddenly we see force lightning erupt from Luke, blasting back towards a surprised Snoke. The nearest Preatorian guard are force choked. Rey and Kylo are released as Snoke as snoke needs all his force powers to counter Luke.

19. Back on the rebel base Phasma/Finn get their epic showdown after butting heads through the battle tactics. Poe leads the air defense, trusting Holdo's orders. Things still look grim though, even though the first order are hurt, they are fighting a losing battle.

20. A mixed battle ensues in the throne room. Rey/Kylo teaming up against the Preatorians, Snoke and Luke going 1 one 1, in a true darkside duel. Snoke realises that a turned Luke is his worst nightmare armed with the destructive powers of the dark side. The son has picked up the legacy of his father...

21. Just when things are starting to fall apart on the ground, allied factions swayed by Leia turn up in a surprise rescue offensive, clearing a way and securing a landing zone to get the surviving rebels out. SOme of them will be wookiies...led by Chewie in the Milennium Falcon. Holdo valiently sacrifices herself to cover the evacuation.

22. Luke eventually kills Snoke. Painfully, taking pleasure in it. Taunting him... Then he turns to Kylo, who has fought back to back with Rey. Still ambigious if he fought to save his own skin or has had a change of heart. Luke attacks to kill him too. Rey ultimately stops him...force-linking with Leia...now aware through searching her feelings who Leia and Luke are to her. Her family. Getting through at last...we see Luke turn back to the light mainly through Rey (and Leia). His love conquering his anger and hate.

23. Kylo retreats behind reinforcements sent by a competent Hux...perhaps truly betrayed by his former master and uncle this time. Rey and Luke fight their way to a ship, and escapes, linking up with the beaten rebels on the evacuation ships. We see a happy reunion of the main cast and new cast. Hux curses them as they leave. In the background we sense the power vacuum left by Snoke, Kylo/Hux both manouvering to take control in an uneasy alliance. Kylo sends for his knights to strengthen his position, setting up some strong players for IX.

The film ends with open questions and a lot to look forward to. Is there hope for Kylo? How will power intrigues within the first order go, and not to say the entire galactic forces in regards to choosing sides/getting themselves involved fully. Will Luke stay on track on the light side onwards? How will he and Rey form a relation/Rey's real training go with a master prone to the weakness of the Skywalker anger?