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Anyone interested in helping with a fan script for a Grievous series?

Discussion in 'Fan Film' started by TheSenate, Jan 7, 2018.

  1. TheSenate

    TheSenate Rebel Trooper

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    I'm writing a slightly episodic series about the life of General Grievous. I've written the script for the first two episodes already, but I fear those aren't quite up to snuff. If you want to read them, then go ahead:

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/...Vn-_Zo6lt8oXTpLzs/edit#heading=h.nynqcexsmnnl

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/...j_YhLF1LrstNpxsBQ/edit#heading=h.8j20xc8gyg8x

    I was wondering if anyone wanted to help out with them. Also, if it's continuity issues that you're finding, keep in mind that not all of the dialogue is going to be an exact retelling.
     
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    This looks very interesting . It’s all new to me but I’m happy to help with anything I can. Your scripts are great an dolce Dooku and Grievous!
     
    #2 StarWarsGaming, Mar 28, 2018
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    Yeah, looking back on this, (I had stopped due to a lack of interest from the community - guess I should get back to it) the way I write Dooku is a little off, seeing as he is Grievous' superior and I right him more as his peer here.
     
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    You should give him and General Grievous more of a Ben SOlo/Hux vibe .
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    Except more elegant.
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    because it is a more civilized age
     
    #4 AstromechRecords, Mar 29, 2018
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    Yeah yeah I’m interested. Sounds really interesting.
     
    #5 StarWarsGaming, Apr 4, 2018
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