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Hal's atrocities of a literal kind.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Hal Berger, Sep 20, 2014.

  1. Hal Berger

    Hal Berger Rebel Commander

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    Hello, since we've been having the Fanfiction sub-forum available for a while, I decided to be the one to cut the ribbon and put some life in here. Since I'm not good with starting posts, I'll just go ahead and post the links to the texts themselves.

    When a group of pirates begin to harass merchant ships travelling along the Hydian Way, blaming fingers point to the nearby system of Mandalore. In order to avoid an increase in hostilities, the New Republic Chief of State, Ponc Gavrisom sends Leia Organa to Mandalore for preliminary peace negotiations. Leia recruits an old smuggler, a wookiee and a young Jedi apprentice to help her in her endeavour.

    Slightly cleaner version at deviantArt.
    Alternative link to FanFiction.net.
    Warning lots of exposition with little to no character development and around 8788 words.
    I most likely forgot to mention something, but I'm certain it surfaces itself as time progresses.
    Feel free to give criticism, suggestions and ideas or ask questions. Of course you can just yell at me for causing you to waste your precious time that you never get back.
     
    #1 Hal Berger, Sep 20, 2014
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