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SPECULATION Create you own script pieces for EPIX

Discussion in 'General Sequel Trilogy Discussion' started by oldbert, Nov 29, 2016.

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  1. oldbert

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    Feel free to create your own little pieces of script. It have not to be the key scenes. Also the funny smaller ones are welcome!
     
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    Okay, I give it a shot. I tried to mirror the crucial moment of ROTJ. I call this scene "Rebirth of the Son".

    INT. SNOKE'S HIDEOUT - NIGHT

    LUKE SKYWALKER is beaten. -- KYLO REN kneels before the LIFELESS body of his uncle.
    REY is still FROZEN by the mighty force powers of SUPREME LEADER SNOKE. She tries to move but her efforts are useless.
    Snoke rises from his throne, LAUGHING.

    SNOKE
    Finally, Skywalker is no more. The last of the Jedi killed by his own nephew.
    Rey stares ANGRY at Snoke.
    SNOKE (CONT'D)
    (to Rey)
    You see, there is no way to stop the dark side.
    Rey tries to reach for her lightsaber. Her arm is slowly coming closer to the weapon.

    SNOKE
    Good. Your hatred makes you powerful.
    Snoke approaches Rey and takes the SKYWALKER-SWORD from Rey's belt.

    SNOKE (CONT'D)
    But not powerful enough. Join me and I will show you the real nature of the force. It is your destiny.

    REY
    Never. You're monster!

    SNOKE
    Misdirected passion. Silly girl.
    Snoke looks at the lightsaber. DISGUSTED, he slings it away.

    SNOKE (CONT'D)
    Fine then. You shall share the same fate as Skywalker.
    Snoke raises his hand and Rey floats in the air. Snoke is FORCE CHOKING her.

    Kylo Ren is still kneeling before Luke Skywalker. He looks down at him, SHOCKED. A tear runs down his scarred face.
    We hear WHISPERINGS of several voices:

    LOR SAN TEKKA (V.O.)
    The First Order rose from the dark side. You did not.

    HAN SOLO (V.O.)
    Snoke uses you for your powers.

    LEIA (V.O.)
    There is still light in you.

    LUKE SKYWALKER (V.O.)
    Let go off your hate.

    REY (V.O.)
    Ben!
    Kylo Ren awakens. We hear the HORRIBLE LAUGH of Snoke while he is torturing Rey. Kylo Ren looks up and raises. He turns to face Snoke and Rey.

    Rey is GASPING for air when suddendly Kylo Ren tackles Snoke down to the ground. Rey collapses COUGHING on the ground. Snoke and Kylo Ren recover their legs.

    SNOKE
    I might have guessed your treason, Kylo Ren. You are indeed like your grandfather. But it was foolish to attack me without a weapon.

    KYLO REN
    I got a weapon.​

    Ren reaches out is hand.

    KYLO REN (CONT'D)
    The weapon of my family.​

    A lightsaber flies to Ren's hand. The lightsaber which once belonged to ANAKIN SKYWALKER and his Son.

    KYLO REN (CONT'D)
    And my name isn't Kylo Ren. It's Ben Solo.​

    Ben Solo activates the lightsaber and a BLUE saber emerges.
     
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    Wow very dramatic! I hope people don't get disappointed if its not even close to this. Reminds me of the throne room scene in ROTJ.
     
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    Thanks! I really hope Kylo Ren will use the Skywalker-Sword in this fashion. In TFA he couldn't reach out for the lightsaber only after his redemption he is able to use the saber.
     
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    Cool one!
     
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    INT. PRISON CELL – DAY

    The room is completely medieval. With the war between the Resistance and the First Order at its pinnacle, both sides have had to make use of sub-standard facilities. The cell is dank and dim, with just a shaft of blue light streaming in from a slit high on the wall; too high to reach. Into the blue light enters FINN, sitting bolt upright, sweating and breathing heavily as if woken from a nightmare.

    CUT TO:​

    Tight shot of FINN. He tries to catch his breath, staring straight into the camera for a long moment. There are FOOTSTEPS growing louder.

    CUT TO:​

    CAPTAIN PHASMA stands in the doorway, rifle in hand, as a guard closes and locks the door behind her and exits.

    PHASMA
    Hello, FN-2187. It's been a long time.​

    She removes her helmet. For the first time, we see her face. She is beautiful but frightening. She places her helmet—and rifle—in the corner near the door.

    PHASMA
    (pause)
    I didn't expect you to salute. But I did expect you to say something.

    FINN
    (calming himself)
    Like what?

    PHASMA
    Like 'Sorry about the garbage compactor, Captain. It wasn't very sporting,' or 'Sorry for defecting, sorry for being traitorous, stupid, murderous.' Perhaps something like that?

    FINN
    (scoffs)

    PHASMA
    Well. I suppose it's better that you can't thinking of anything clever. We don't have much time, you see.

    FINN
    (defiant)
    Oh, good? So you came to break me out, then?​

    CUT TO:​

    Tight shot of PHASMA's face. She smiles very slowly.

    PHASMA
    (pause)
    No. Not quite. But I am going to break you.​

    PHASMA approaches FINN, who tries to raise his hand in defense, only to find his hands are shackled to the ground he's sitting on.

    PHASMA
    I know you know where she is. I know you know the attack plan, the squadron leaders. I know you taught our tactics to the peasants and invalids you call soldiers. And. (pause) I know how to get that information from you.​

    PHASMA leans forward. She is standing only a few feet from FINN, her face close his.

    CUT TO:​

    Medium shot over FINN's shoulder. Through the bars of the doors, the First Order guard returns. PHASMA, hearing his footsteps, stands back erect. She turns around to face the guard.

    PHASMA
    I told you to leave us!​

    With PHASMA's back turned, FINN realizes that the guard is POE DAMERON in disguise!

    FINN
    (mouthing silently to POE)
    What are you doing here?!

    POE
    (to PHASMA)
    Uh, yes, captain.​

    PHASMA turns back toward FINN, who quickly tries to look as he did before she turned.

    POE
    (mouthing silently to FINN)
    No weapon! (he gestures to show he's unarmed)
    FINN tries not to glance at POE. From FINN's point-of-view, we see POE scramble to try to reach PHASMA's RIFLE, but is it just out of reach.

    PHASMA whips around, realizing POE has not left. POE attempts to look as he did before PHASMA turned around. She swiftly walks to the doorway.

    PHASMA
    (anger rising)
    I told you to be gone!

    POE
    Yes, yes, captain. Uh, I just wanted to see if. To see if you could help me (stumbles for words) ... identify ... this.​

    POE reaches into his pocket and reaches a closed hand through the bars. As PHASMA looks down he grabs her cape with his other hand and pulls PHASMA's head into the bars with a loud CLANG!

    CUT TO:​

    Medium over-the-shoulder shot from behind FINN. PHASMA stands at the door, dazed. We hear a metallic CLICK and the door flies open, throwing PHASMA to the floor and knocking her out cold! POE steps over PHASMA.

    POE
    Hey, buddy. It's been a long time.

    FINN
    Believe it or not, you're not the first person to say that to me today.

    POE
    (unshackling FINN)
    Boy, I'm I glad to see you again. We're gonna need your help. You feel up to flying?

    FINN
    Well, I—

    POE
    Good. We've gotta help Rey. And we gotta do it fast, or this whole thing's going down in flames.

    FINN
    (stopping POE as he begins to exit the CELL)
    Wait, they've got Rey? Where is she?

    POE
    I'll tell you on the way, let's go!​

    POE and FINN exit, closing the CELL with PHASMA in it.
     
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    Exciting tale Darth of Information. Poe rescues Finn nice touch. I guess they're even now. haha I like ur avatar kind of reminds me of that old Greedo's tale.
     
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    Thanks! Also wanted the scene to feel a bit like the gang's rescue of Han in ROTJ. Glad you enjoyed it!
     
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